for Making Waves12/26/2022 c30 
4Okaze
Well the group now has one HELL of a drive to get stronger. To get strong enough to kill Acnologia is a high hill to climb. Also wow, did not expect Gray of all people to die!
4OkazeWell the group now has one HELL of a drive to get stronger. To get strong enough to kill Acnologia is a high hill to climb. Also wow, did not expect Gray of all people to die!
12/26/2022 c30 2Mr. Haziq
I feel like this shouldn't be here
\V/
Changed quite a bit here to make this segment flow, while also including the time change aspect. Well done on spotting that, had forgotten:
magineered?
I kinda wanna see a dude hang out of just Ranma, Laxus And Azuma fighting each other.
bene?
Ah... 2/3 of the Thunder Tribe gone? Dang...
WOW. You offed Gray too!? Ballsy!
Do I sense a training montage?
2Mr. HaziqI feel like this shouldn't be here
\V/
Changed quite a bit here to make this segment flow, while also including the time change aspect. Well done on spotting that, had forgotten:
magineered?
I kinda wanna see a dude hang out of just Ranma, Laxus And Azuma fighting each other.
bene?
Ah... 2/3 of the Thunder Tribe gone? Dang...
WOW. You offed Gray too!? Ballsy!
Do I sense a training montage?
12/25/2022 c30 Rebell 01
Heavy losses but at least not a 7 year timeskip. I am looking foreward to your next chapter.
Heavy losses but at least not a 7 year timeskip. I am looking foreward to your next chapter.
12/25/2022 c30 Diego Sette Cmara
Again, plot armor, author basically demonstrating that Ranma introduction on Fairy Tail world only made things worse and we have more of the authors scar fetish, since even without healing the injuries he already decided that they are all scarred. \o\
Again, plot armor, author basically demonstrating that Ranma introduction on Fairy Tail world only made things worse and we have more of the authors scar fetish, since even without healing the injuries he already decided that they are all scarred. \o\
12/25/2022 c30 blackcobra32
Changed quite a bit here to make this segment flow, while also including the time change aspect. Well done on spotting that, had forgotten:
i think this is left over from review maybe?
Changed quite a bit here to make this segment flow, while also including the time change aspect. Well done on spotting that, had forgotten:
i think this is left over from review maybe?
11/23/2022 c3 AlmightyFatty
Really enjoy the progress so far!
Only one thing i've noticed in several of your stories so far.. Why must characters "SHOUT AND SCREAM! ", every single attack move or skill they make? Makes as much sense to me as screaming "PUNCH RIGHT HAND" at the enemy before punching , i mean who in their right mind would telegraph a move in such a way lol.
Just something that has been bothering me, makes MC seem like some xianxia novel idiotic young master
Really enjoy the progress so far!
Only one thing i've noticed in several of your stories so far.. Why must characters "SHOUT AND SCREAM! ", every single attack move or skill they make? Makes as much sense to me as screaming "PUNCH RIGHT HAND" at the enemy before punching , i mean who in their right mind would telegraph a move in such a way lol.
Just something that has been bothering me, makes MC seem like some xianxia novel idiotic young master
11/22/2022 c29 32Poetheather1
That was an excellent fight. Finally a true fricking challenge for Ranma. Very well done.
32Poetheather1That was an excellent fight. Finally a true fricking challenge for Ranma. Very well done.
11/11/2022 c29 WearyCurmudgeon
Ranma had him down pat, finding a way around the curse and proving himself smarter than Ankhseram should've been enough. (Like the space solution or the Eidolas one.)
But it's his own ego that's the problem. Hell, he left the impression that Acnologia might've been strong enough to kill him.
If all you care about is passing on, then the HOW shouldn't matter.
So yeah, no "sob" story background can make up for all the harm he has caused either directly or indirectly.
Only a Shounen manga with Nakama on the brain would try to pass him off as a sympathetic being that can be redeemed.
Because if you stop and give it some serious consideration, like you did, than the only conclusion one can come to is that he's full of BS.
Ranma had him down pat, finding a way around the curse and proving himself smarter than Ankhseram should've been enough. (Like the space solution or the Eidolas one.)
But it's his own ego that's the problem. Hell, he left the impression that Acnologia might've been strong enough to kill him.
If all you care about is passing on, then the HOW shouldn't matter.
So yeah, no "sob" story background can make up for all the harm he has caused either directly or indirectly.
Only a Shounen manga with Nakama on the brain would try to pass him off as a sympathetic being that can be redeemed.
Because if you stop and give it some serious consideration, like you did, than the only conclusion one can come to is that he's full of BS.
11/4/2022 c29 Hitmen101
Wow just wow what an magnificent ending to that chapter! Thanks for the chapter! :D :)
Wow just wow what an magnificent ending to that chapter! Thanks for the chapter! :D :)
11/2/2022 c29 kingred222
-Same element is me should be Same element as me
-the two attacks me should be the two attacks met
-Tried to get bast the shadow should be Tried to get past the shadow
These are the only mistakes my tired eye noticed.
-Same element is me should be Same element as me
-the two attacks me should be the two attacks met
-Tried to get bast the shadow should be Tried to get past the shadow
These are the only mistakes my tired eye noticed.