for Making Waves12/22/2024 c3 ranjira1988
This has become one of my favorite Ranma Stories and one reason is because of the frankly adorable Sibling like bond between Ranma and Wendy.
This has become one of my favorite Ranma Stories and one reason is because of the frankly adorable Sibling like bond between Ranma and Wendy.
12/17/2024 c24 ProfessorCatPro
I think the most hilarious part of this chapter is when the kidnapping joke from the previous chapters turned out to not be a joke but an actual plan for future chapters
I think the most hilarious part of this chapter is when the kidnapping joke from the previous chapters turned out to not be a joke but an actual plan for future chapters
12/1/2024 c39 Guest
the situation in Alvarez is really getting interesting with the disappearance of Zeref
the situation in Alvarez is really getting interesting with the disappearance of Zeref
12/1/2024 c39 10indigo10
Loved this chapter, it does a great job of setting up the future arc. Can’t wait to see where this goes! Any plans to address Saber Tooth in the near future?
Loved this chapter, it does a great job of setting up the future arc. Can’t wait to see where this goes! Any plans to address Saber Tooth in the near future?
12/1/2024 c39 
1GideonBlackthorn
loved this chapter but god i so want to reqd Ranma learning he jas a kid! i feel like ive been blue balled for this scene between Horse and Dragon and Making Waves ranma has two kids hes not aware if and its driving me nuts with the suspense! but thats what good writings about getting the interest of the reader and holding onto it with an iron grip.
1GideonBlackthornloved this chapter but god i so want to reqd Ranma learning he jas a kid! i feel like ive been blue balled for this scene between Horse and Dragon and Making Waves ranma has two kids hes not aware if and its driving me nuts with the suspense! but thats what good writings about getting the interest of the reader and holding onto it with an iron grip.
11/30/2024 c39 alphaprince0
I'm happy that Irene is hopefully going to meet Erza soon but I'm disappointed that Selene the Moon Dragon God is dead since she's my favorite dragon from Fairy Tail
I'm happy that Irene is hopefully going to meet Erza soon but I'm disappointed that Selene the Moon Dragon God is dead since she's my favorite dragon from Fairy Tail
11/8/2024 c34 1Ilireanwri
Hello
I found a small error in the part of the chapter where the PoV switches to erza: evergreen is suddenly alive XD
1IlireanwriHello
I found a small error in the part of the chapter where the PoV switches to erza: evergreen is suddenly alive XD
10/9/2024 c9 irgendwe
I have to say, these fight scenes are unbearable
They feel extremely forced, just look at the power scaling and the tactics
Ranma, who is easily S class can't defeat some random guy whos 'boss' he beat (both, the real one even whilst asleep).
Why? Because he barely uses Water Magic, instead he uses pysical force against the physical tank. And when the guy that can reflect magic comes he doesn't use Ki, NO! we actively choose not to, even though we saw that it probably works, but we won't test it, instead we're gonna throw some more magical attacks that were already proven to be ineffective.
I don't understand the logic here
The story is otherwise fine, but sometimes extremely forced
I have to say, these fight scenes are unbearable
They feel extremely forced, just look at the power scaling and the tactics
Ranma, who is easily S class can't defeat some random guy whos 'boss' he beat (both, the real one even whilst asleep).
Why? Because he barely uses Water Magic, instead he uses pysical force against the physical tank. And when the guy that can reflect magic comes he doesn't use Ki, NO! we actively choose not to, even though we saw that it probably works, but we won't test it, instead we're gonna throw some more magical attacks that were already proven to be ineffective.
I don't understand the logic here
The story is otherwise fine, but sometimes extremely forced
10/8/2024 c7 irgendwe
yeah, at this point this is just way too forced
You are really trying to remain very close to the plot and absolutely destroy logic in that pursuit.
Come on, I don't think you have written Ranma using anywhere near his actual strength in any battle that could impact the main plot.
It's just not interesting knowing that canon will happen with barely any changes because Ranma makes a not-so-smart decision...
yeah, at this point this is just way too forced
You are really trying to remain very close to the plot and absolutely destroy logic in that pursuit.
Come on, I don't think you have written Ranma using anywhere near his actual strength in any battle that could impact the main plot.
It's just not interesting knowing that canon will happen with barely any changes because Ranma makes a not-so-smart decision...
9/5/2024 c34 jeffs87
Love the story and the exploration chapter. I took a break from this story after your editor was gone for 6 months and you took a break too. I just felt it deserved a reread before jumping back in. Still love it.
Tiny thing. You had Evergreen being one of the women hearing Erza throw up. She died in the battle against Ancilogia. Which I probably just misspelled, but I’m too lazy to look up.
Anyway thanks for all your hard work. I really appreciate it and enjoy your stories.
Love the story and the exploration chapter. I took a break from this story after your editor was gone for 6 months and you took a break too. I just felt it deserved a reread before jumping back in. Still love it.
Tiny thing. You had Evergreen being one of the women hearing Erza throw up. She died in the battle against Ancilogia. Which I probably just misspelled, but I’m too lazy to look up.
Anyway thanks for all your hard work. I really appreciate it and enjoy your stories.
9/3/2024 c37 alphaprince0
I like how you're incorporating dragons into the story and I hope you have Ranma meet Selene and Mercphobia then have them become friends or at least allies since they're two of my favorite dragons
I like how you're incorporating dragons into the story and I hope you have Ranma meet Selene and Mercphobia then have them become friends or at least allies since they're two of my favorite dragons
9/3/2024 c36 alphaprince0
I hope Irene survives Acnologia so she can be a part of Ranma and Erza's family
I hope Irene survives Acnologia so she can be a part of Ranma and Erza's family