for Making Waves5/26/2024 c36 
2Mr. Haziq
If Acnologia uses his background in healing to give himself an arm transplant, how long would it take to turn it into a dragon limb? Point being, he could've taken Serena's arm for himself.
Joy! They have a son that shares a name with the king of the underworld. Wonder how Ranma will feel about the name.
Oh? They've met Kurnugi before any attempt to eat him has happened. Cool!
Wonder how Irene will react to being a grandma...
2Mr. HaziqIf Acnologia uses his background in healing to give himself an arm transplant, how long would it take to turn it into a dragon limb? Point being, he could've taken Serena's arm for himself.
Joy! They have a son that shares a name with the king of the underworld. Wonder how Ranma will feel about the name.
Oh? They've met Kurnugi before any attempt to eat him has happened. Cool!
Wonder how Irene will react to being a grandma...
5/21/2024 c36 1GideonBlackthorn
finally finished re reading and the new chapter, vey very good! but one question...i thought evergreen was literally blasted out of existence back on tenrou island? is this just a misnaming thing or is tit like mest gryders mind muckery or something else entirely?either way love to see where this fic goes especially erza treeting ranma on his return! (oh the ass kicking hes gonna be in for!)
1GideonBlackthornfinally finished re reading and the new chapter, vey very good! but one question...i thought evergreen was literally blasted out of existence back on tenrou island? is this just a misnaming thing or is tit like mest gryders mind muckery or something else entirely?either way love to see where this fic goes especially erza treeting ranma on his return! (oh the ass kicking hes gonna be in for!)
5/15/2024 c36 WearyCurmudgeon
It'll be interesting to see how the butterfly wings effect things.
From Zeref no longer mindf*cking Irene to how she'll take being a grandma, heh.
Appropriate name for the tyke as well, Emma, the King of Hell.
As for Ranma sensing Wendy's successful application of make them mad, make them stupid. How is that any different from Nodoka being able to sense whenever Ranma is getting jiggy with the ladies?
Just a weird bloodline thing.
It'll be interesting to see how the butterfly wings effect things.
From Zeref no longer mindf*cking Irene to how she'll take being a grandma, heh.
Appropriate name for the tyke as well, Emma, the King of Hell.
As for Ranma sensing Wendy's successful application of make them mad, make them stupid. How is that any different from Nodoka being able to sense whenever Ranma is getting jiggy with the ladies?
Just a weird bloodline thing.
5/13/2024 c36 Guest
the whole dragon invasion might have been prevented here though for the plot it might still happen somehow
the whole dragon invasion might have been prevented here though for the plot it might still happen somehow
5/13/2024 c36 Rebell 01
Thanks for the update. I like you bringing the new character the son of selene in. It will be interesting to see how he influences the story when in canon he was just food for the dragoneaters.
Thanks for the update. I like you bringing the new character the son of selene in. It will be interesting to see how he influences the story when in canon he was just food for the dragoneaters.
5/12/2024 c36 1GideonBlackthorn
thNks for the mothers day present but now ou know what i have to do right?
*flips to chapter 1*
lets run this back one more time...
1GideonBlackthornthNks for the mothers day present but now ou know what i have to do right?
*flips to chapter 1*
lets run this back one more time...
4/24/2024 c34 4RyMalice
Quick note. You mentioned Evergreen here, but didn't she die during the attack by the dragon?
4RyMaliceQuick note. You mentioned Evergreen here, but didn't she die during the attack by the dragon?
4/13/2024 c35 BlackfoxNinja
ok I have reread all current chapters posted . So is evergreen dead or was that a miss label of a character? as pointedly said "not it" when figuring out Erza's condition.
ok I have reread all current chapters posted . So is evergreen dead or was that a miss label of a character? as pointedly said "not it" when figuring out Erza's condition.
3/19/2024 c23 Guest
and Gildarts helped ranma lift that mountain weighted anima crystal?
with an arm and a leg missing?
thats like less than half his muscle power
hes probably using ki too
and Gildarts helped ranma lift that mountain weighted anima crystal?
with an arm and a leg missing?
thats like less than half his muscle power
hes probably using ki too
1/28/2024 c35 Guest
Can someone please make a TV Tropes page for this fanfic.
Can someone please make a TV Tropes page for this fanfic.
1/29/2024 c35 9K. M. Donovan
took me a while, like a year and a half, but i finally caught up to the final chapter.
kept getting distracted.
i STILL have not finished Third Path to the Future, but it is on the list. this time i did not lose my spot, so there is no need to restart from the beginning again.
love the fic overall, and i eagerly await the next chapters.
and as always
thank you for your time.
9K. M. Donovantook me a while, like a year and a half, but i finally caught up to the final chapter.
kept getting distracted.
i STILL have not finished Third Path to the Future, but it is on the list. this time i did not lose my spot, so there is no need to restart from the beginning again.
love the fic overall, and i eagerly await the next chapters.
and as always
thank you for your time.
1/26/2024 c18 K. M. Donovan
ah, Girl Genius. nice choice. it is an awesome series, and one of my all time favorite webcomics. especially considering it is STILL RUNNING!
you should look into doing a Ranma or Harry potter crossover with the series. i foresee much shenanigans and chaos... GLORIOUS CHAOS!
only caveat. if you do such a crossover, then i strongly reccomend that the protagonist of your choice (Harry or Ranma) be a Spark. either becoming one as a result of their entry into the Girl Genius universe, or through some kind of cosmic, mad science induced shenanigans.
but, if you go the route of them BECOMING a spark artificially? it should be accidental, impossible to reproduce, and the cause of everyone and their dog wanting to get their hands on them to figure out how to replicate the process.
now, personally, i would NOT make them in any way connected to the Heterodynes. Agatha has that angle well and truly covered. but a powerful Spark who is on PAR with a Heterodyne, and just as mad? by all means.
hell, have them Ascend at some point. obviously not for a LONG time into the fic, ascended sparks being nearly godlike means that you do not want to go that route too early. the power increase has to make sense from a narrative standpoint.
personally i would go the harry potter route with that idea. especially if you make him a spark. Ranma... is a bit too much of a meathead for it to work well in my mind.
Harry... he has magic, that requires intelligence and rational thinking. plus the ability to thick outside the box. add being a spark into the mix? and let the chaos flow.
final note. if you go with harry, do NOT strip him of his magic. make it work with the tech. hell, i have this idea in my head of him creating a pair of magic fueled pistols that fire energy rounds.
or even a pair of gauntlets that do the same thing.
the possibility's are endless. but sadly amongst the fanfiction community, Girl genius is not as well known, so the pickings are pretty slim for fanfiction. especially crossovers.
and as always
thank you for your time.
ah, Girl Genius. nice choice. it is an awesome series, and one of my all time favorite webcomics. especially considering it is STILL RUNNING!
you should look into doing a Ranma or Harry potter crossover with the series. i foresee much shenanigans and chaos... GLORIOUS CHAOS!
only caveat. if you do such a crossover, then i strongly reccomend that the protagonist of your choice (Harry or Ranma) be a Spark. either becoming one as a result of their entry into the Girl Genius universe, or through some kind of cosmic, mad science induced shenanigans.
but, if you go the route of them BECOMING a spark artificially? it should be accidental, impossible to reproduce, and the cause of everyone and their dog wanting to get their hands on them to figure out how to replicate the process.
now, personally, i would NOT make them in any way connected to the Heterodynes. Agatha has that angle well and truly covered. but a powerful Spark who is on PAR with a Heterodyne, and just as mad? by all means.
hell, have them Ascend at some point. obviously not for a LONG time into the fic, ascended sparks being nearly godlike means that you do not want to go that route too early. the power increase has to make sense from a narrative standpoint.
personally i would go the harry potter route with that idea. especially if you make him a spark. Ranma... is a bit too much of a meathead for it to work well in my mind.
Harry... he has magic, that requires intelligence and rational thinking. plus the ability to thick outside the box. add being a spark into the mix? and let the chaos flow.
final note. if you go with harry, do NOT strip him of his magic. make it work with the tech. hell, i have this idea in my head of him creating a pair of magic fueled pistols that fire energy rounds.
or even a pair of gauntlets that do the same thing.
the possibility's are endless. but sadly amongst the fanfiction community, Girl genius is not as well known, so the pickings are pretty slim for fanfiction. especially crossovers.
and as always
thank you for your time.
12/7/2023 c26 2Malchior
So in canon, Mest was a Fairy Tail member that worked with Makarov to mind wipe the guild into forgetting about him so he could insert himself into the magic council and spy on them. You say this doesn't pass your sanity check... okay.
So instead, you find it more believable that Mest was able to mindwipe the entire guild, *including* Makarov, Guildarts, and Laxus, on top of mind wiping Ranma, Wendy, and Seilah, without any of them knowing, finding out about it, or fighting off the magic... all on his own?
I just don't buy it. In canon, Mest was able to affect a single powerful person, like Brandish, for a moment. Long enough for her to act on the impulse and attack August, but it very quickly fails afterward. Mest being able to fool Fairy Tail with Makarov's help is far more believable, especially since they wouldn't even really need to fool Guildarts because it would be easy to explain that Mest joined the guild during the years Guildarts was gone on his 100 year quest.
Instead, you have Mest having enough magic power to overhwlem every member of Fairy Tail and its allies. Not only that, Mest had to be able to sneak up on someone like Ranma and modify his memories without being detected as well.
This is just unbelievable to me. It literally makes Mest one of the most dangerous people alive if true. Ranma was able to take out the guy who becomes the assassin of the Alvarez Empire when Ranma was just a boy. There is no way Mest is sneaking up on Ranma, and no way Mest is mind wiping the entire guild on his own. And not for such a long period of time either.
I'm sure you address it later, but because you made Mest an actual spy for the magic council, then that means the secret of Seilah still being alive is out and the council knows about it. Not that it matters too much because Tartarus has been destroyed, but it still means that particular secret is no longer hidden.
Also, I would like to add that the Wizard Saints did not measure up here as well as one would hope. In canon, Natsu was able to take out Jackal, and since Jackal did a number on Wolfy boy, would that not mean Natsu is comparable to him? Also, Ranma easily ripped apart Tarafuzar who. in this story, was the second strongest member of Tartarus. So the fact that the Wizard Saints struggled so much against the Demons means they are far, far weaker than Ranma, the Demons managed to get a massive power up somehow. or a mistake was made.
Personally, I'm more of the opinion the Saints aren't as strong as they think. Serena, at least, is supposed to be immune to his elements as a dragon slayer, which means it's possible Serena never bothered to master his magic. Possibly, hes having a similar problem to Ranma with all of the different dragon slayer elements conflicting and negating a lot of the defensive abilities of the magic.
2MalchiorSo in canon, Mest was a Fairy Tail member that worked with Makarov to mind wipe the guild into forgetting about him so he could insert himself into the magic council and spy on them. You say this doesn't pass your sanity check... okay.
So instead, you find it more believable that Mest was able to mindwipe the entire guild, *including* Makarov, Guildarts, and Laxus, on top of mind wiping Ranma, Wendy, and Seilah, without any of them knowing, finding out about it, or fighting off the magic... all on his own?
I just don't buy it. In canon, Mest was able to affect a single powerful person, like Brandish, for a moment. Long enough for her to act on the impulse and attack August, but it very quickly fails afterward. Mest being able to fool Fairy Tail with Makarov's help is far more believable, especially since they wouldn't even really need to fool Guildarts because it would be easy to explain that Mest joined the guild during the years Guildarts was gone on his 100 year quest.
Instead, you have Mest having enough magic power to overhwlem every member of Fairy Tail and its allies. Not only that, Mest had to be able to sneak up on someone like Ranma and modify his memories without being detected as well.
This is just unbelievable to me. It literally makes Mest one of the most dangerous people alive if true. Ranma was able to take out the guy who becomes the assassin of the Alvarez Empire when Ranma was just a boy. There is no way Mest is sneaking up on Ranma, and no way Mest is mind wiping the entire guild on his own. And not for such a long period of time either.
I'm sure you address it later, but because you made Mest an actual spy for the magic council, then that means the secret of Seilah still being alive is out and the council knows about it. Not that it matters too much because Tartarus has been destroyed, but it still means that particular secret is no longer hidden.
Also, I would like to add that the Wizard Saints did not measure up here as well as one would hope. In canon, Natsu was able to take out Jackal, and since Jackal did a number on Wolfy boy, would that not mean Natsu is comparable to him? Also, Ranma easily ripped apart Tarafuzar who. in this story, was the second strongest member of Tartarus. So the fact that the Wizard Saints struggled so much against the Demons means they are far, far weaker than Ranma, the Demons managed to get a massive power up somehow. or a mistake was made.
Personally, I'm more of the opinion the Saints aren't as strong as they think. Serena, at least, is supposed to be immune to his elements as a dragon slayer, which means it's possible Serena never bothered to master his magic. Possibly, hes having a similar problem to Ranma with all of the different dragon slayer elements conflicting and negating a lot of the defensive abilities of the magic.