for Spread Your Wings8/12/2022 c14 gruntled
This is at least my second time reading this story and it is so good! I'm sad I didn't comment on it earlier. I love how thoughtful it is written. I love the drama and typical trope of Lisanna returns and it starts some jealousy shite but the stories are always so OOC. The team would never turn there back to Lucy and make her feel inferior, especially not Fairy Tail as a whole, kinda goes against the whole idea of Fairy Tail. This is definitely close to the characters out of all 'Lisanna Returns' stories and how I can imagine them acting. Of course, Lisanna is OOC but I can see how much a sharp change is so jarring and could do that to someones mental. Thank you so much for the great read!
This is at least my second time reading this story and it is so good! I'm sad I didn't comment on it earlier. I love how thoughtful it is written. I love the drama and typical trope of Lisanna returns and it starts some jealousy shite but the stories are always so OOC. The team would never turn there back to Lucy and make her feel inferior, especially not Fairy Tail as a whole, kinda goes against the whole idea of Fairy Tail. This is definitely close to the characters out of all 'Lisanna Returns' stories and how I can imagine them acting. Of course, Lisanna is OOC but I can see how much a sharp change is so jarring and could do that to someones mental. Thank you so much for the great read!
2/2/2022 c14 alainehope
This is one of the best "lucy leaves to get stronger" fics I've read! Normally I find attempts at inserting OCs into the fairy tail world a little awkward but I really loved rai, torin, and lona! Also I think the concept of lisanna being unstable after literally shifting worlds is so realistic and really should have been explored in canon.
This is one of the best "lucy leaves to get stronger" fics I've read! Normally I find attempts at inserting OCs into the fairy tail world a little awkward but I really loved rai, torin, and lona! Also I think the concept of lisanna being unstable after literally shifting worlds is so realistic and really should have been explored in canon.
1/1/2021 c5 Guest
Liss Ana is being really
Bichy
Liss Ana is being really
Bichy
10/25/2020 c9 NoragamiGirl
Loved this chapter! You are a great writer! I loved reading about how protective the dragon slayers are over wendy! Great work can't wait to read more!
Loved this chapter! You are a great writer! I loved reading about how protective the dragon slayers are over wendy! Great work can't wait to read more!
8/13/2020 c14 underlings
This story aahhh I loved it! Love how we came full circle with Lisanna narrating both the Prologue and Epilogue. I enjoy how you navigated her mind while also giving us amazing Nalu and Lucy being incredible! Lucy’s journey to grow stronger was amazing to see and I appreciate how the root of her decision to temporarily leave made so much sense. Nalu never really have serious moments of conflict between them in canon so seeing it here was super interesting. Also the little sprinkles of humor all throughout the story made me smile so much
This story aahhh I loved it! Love how we came full circle with Lisanna narrating both the Prologue and Epilogue. I enjoy how you navigated her mind while also giving us amazing Nalu and Lucy being incredible! Lucy’s journey to grow stronger was amazing to see and I appreciate how the root of her decision to temporarily leave made so much sense. Nalu never really have serious moments of conflict between them in canon so seeing it here was super interesting. Also the little sprinkles of humor all throughout the story made me smile so much
1/5/2020 c14 Sparti28
Great story! Couldn’t stop reading it loved the different POV and the storyline. Thank you so much for sharing. Hope your wedding day was magical!
Great story! Couldn’t stop reading it loved the different POV and the storyline. Thank you so much for sharing. Hope your wedding day was magical!
1/5/2020 c2 Sparti28
Only two chapter in a few years this story had my emotions all kinds of crazy. Can’t wait to keep reading
Only two chapter in a few years this story had my emotions all kinds of crazy. Can’t wait to keep reading
11/20/2019 c11 cosmictrap
i'm also lowkey afraid what lisanna meant by "pay"
i'm also lowkey afraid what lisanna meant by "pay"
11/20/2019 c14 
70cosmictrap
you're getting married! omg even though that was . a year ago now, congratulationssss
70cosmictrapyou're getting married! omg even though that was . a year ago now, congratulationssss
11/20/2019 c12 cosmictrap
ok. i am like. on the edge. you are actually right, lisanna probably feels more replaced... i empathise but i also don't. like natsu's line of thought was right... ish. and your author's note made me feel a tad bit more bad for her than i was feeling. you're a really good writer and i really like how i;m sort of on the edge about hating lisanna because i don't wanna hate her but i can't condone her either. ahhhh dead. i love this. lisanna is cray cray and i see where she's coming from but i find it somewhat hard to sympathise... a little bad? yes. but like... IDK HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO TORN. you're just that good ugh [ also gajeel... lmaooooooooooo. that was so slippin cute ]
ok. i am like. on the edge. you are actually right, lisanna probably feels more replaced... i empathise but i also don't. like natsu's line of thought was right... ish. and your author's note made me feel a tad bit more bad for her than i was feeling. you're a really good writer and i really like how i;m sort of on the edge about hating lisanna because i don't wanna hate her but i can't condone her either. ahhhh dead. i love this. lisanna is cray cray and i see where she's coming from but i find it somewhat hard to sympathise... a little bad? yes. but like... IDK HOW DARE YOU MAKE ME FEEL SO TORN. you're just that good ugh [ also gajeel... lmaooooooooooo. that was so slippin cute ]