for The Fourth Beast13h c43 Daddyd799
I really hope you come back to this story. It is a story that beyond whatever I could normally think of for a Naruto story. I find the concepts and thoughts quite interesting and complex. And there's still enough Naruto type fun to make everything okay. Do you've been doing an excellent job and I don't know if you are an author but if you aren't you probably should be.
I really hope you come back to this story. It is a story that beyond whatever I could normally think of for a Naruto story. I find the concepts and thoughts quite interesting and complex. And there's still enough Naruto type fun to make everything okay. Do you've been doing an excellent job and I don't know if you are an author but if you aren't you probably should be.
5/7 c43 Jugo2017
I love this story but it’s been awhile since it’s gotten an update. Is it still being worked on?
I love this story but it’s been awhile since it’s gotten an update. Is it still being worked on?
3/27 c2 Guest
Nuh uh he is Obito with dementia on crack chugging Tylenol flavored red bulls
Nuh uh he is Obito with dementia on crack chugging Tylenol flavored red bulls
3/10 c43 Ashley
This story would have been much more interesting had it been revealed that Naruto is one of the Beasts. But alas, even a write fic writer like yourself isn’t perfect nor immune to filler chapters. *sigh* Making Ophis into some great unbeatable powerhouse will tarnish this story, as the Greeks are already sucking the joy out of this fic
This story would have been much more interesting had it been revealed that Naruto is one of the Beasts. But alas, even a write fic writer like yourself isn’t perfect nor immune to filler chapters. *sigh* Making Ophis into some great unbeatable powerhouse will tarnish this story, as the Greeks are already sucking the joy out of this fic
1/25 c43 moadmide8
maaaan just be cool and finish this fic i am taured of waiting do not make me wait another year
maaaan just be cool and finish this fic i am taured of waiting do not make me wait another year
12/31/2024 c43 Guest
Waiting for next chapter
Waiting for next chapter
12/13/2024 c43 Alpha Naveen
I think you took enough break to write a story so UPDATE IT NOW I AM WAITING
I think you took enough break to write a story so UPDATE IT NOW I AM WAITING
12/12/2024 c41 Madgeer
Damnn finally some summary, i had to skip a few chapters because I want to know how naruto doing, now i got the summary, it’ll make sense
Damnn finally some summary, i had to skip a few chapters because I want to know how naruto doing, now i got the summary, it’ll make sense
11/27/2024 c43 Unnatural Reader
Just finished reading this story again, probably my 4th time lol. You left us with a lot of questions and some answers plus the promise of a new adventure for our favorite knucklehead ninja. Looking forward to seeing that adventure as well as some updates on the DXD world like Yasaka and the different factions
Keep up the fantastic work
Just finished reading this story again, probably my 4th time lol. You left us with a lot of questions and some answers plus the promise of a new adventure for our favorite knucklehead ninja. Looking forward to seeing that adventure as well as some updates on the DXD world like Yasaka and the different factions
Keep up the fantastic work
11/21/2024 c13 Angeloux
Man, I like this story, but the writing style confuses me. It’s like all the fun interesting stuff happened in another book that we’ll never get to read, and we’re just left with the boring after-effects. Why did all the action happen “off screen”? It’s been nothing but talking talking talking.
Man, I like this story, but the writing style confuses me. It’s like all the fun interesting stuff happened in another book that we’ll never get to read, and we’re just left with the boring after-effects. Why did all the action happen “off screen”? It’s been nothing but talking talking talking.
11/13/2024 c2 Unknown
I would like to give some comments regarding this fanfic. First, I like it when the mc becomes a villain in the beginning of the chapter until the middle of the chapter, second, here Naruto is still kind by giving The demons, it might be more interesting if Naruto slaughtered them like Madara did, and the last one might be the fight part where it's less told and mostly discusses politics. But This is just my comment regarding this fanfic, if the author thinks it is good, please continue. That's all, thank you from me
I would like to give some comments regarding this fanfic. First, I like it when the mc becomes a villain in the beginning of the chapter until the middle of the chapter, second, here Naruto is still kind by giving The demons, it might be more interesting if Naruto slaughtered them like Madara did, and the last one might be the fight part where it's less told and mostly discusses politics. But This is just my comment regarding this fanfic, if the author thinks it is good, please continue. That's all, thank you from me
9/19/2024 c3 MatteusN
This starting from the middle thing is so annoying and unnecessary. Really disappointed by this.
This starting from the middle thing is so annoying and unnecessary. Really disappointed by this.