for The Fourth Beast5/6 c20 
8Quathis
Still the prankster I see. Good feels here, the thrill of the chase but with a possibly amiable ending. Will take a re-read to see what's been changed. Until next time.
8QuathisStill the prankster I see. Good feels here, the thrill of the chase but with a possibly amiable ending. Will take a re-read to see what's been changed. Until next time.
5/6 c20 fallendemon248
Naruto use Unlimited Food no Jutsu….. It was super effective! Nani!?
Great Red is now able to be befriend…..
Lol if this fucking works I’m gonna die laughing. Love the chapter though I do wonder what they found with the sealed universe or prison or whatever it is
Naruto use Unlimited Food no Jutsu….. It was super effective! Nani!?
Great Red is now able to be befriend…..
Lol if this fucking works I’m gonna die laughing. Love the chapter though I do wonder what they found with the sealed universe or prison or whatever it is
5/6 c20 jabali1990
Really happy to see an update. Even happier to learn that the whole story has been reworked. I can read the full thing again. Thats my weekend sorted!
Really happy to see an update. Even happier to learn that the whole story has been reworked. I can read the full thing again. Thats my weekend sorted!
5/6 c1 6Bhuvan Nagaraj.D
God was I scared, I thought you had abandoned the sorry for god sake you gave me one hell of a scare bro and all the best and good luck
6Bhuvan Nagaraj.DGod was I scared, I thought you had abandoned the sorry for god sake you gave me one hell of a scare bro and all the best and good luck
3/22 c19 4Shawn. Just shawn
Damnnnn you made jiraiya scary in this one! And no, I don't mean 'ohh I'm so powerful' scary, I mean he is powerful, but that's not why he's scary in this one.
He's scary, because unlike naruto, who can't move around without being noticed, jiraiya is free to move in the shadow naruto has made on all the other factions.
I'm not afraid of the guy who's in the light waving the big stick, I'm afraid of the guy in his shadow who can do the exact same, and even more then him because of no backlash from public being a factor. They are the ones you fear.
4Shawn. Just shawnDamnnnn you made jiraiya scary in this one! And no, I don't mean 'ohh I'm so powerful' scary, I mean he is powerful, but that's not why he's scary in this one.
He's scary, because unlike naruto, who can't move around without being noticed, jiraiya is free to move in the shadow naruto has made on all the other factions.
I'm not afraid of the guy who's in the light waving the big stick, I'm afraid of the guy in his shadow who can do the exact same, and even more then him because of no backlash from public being a factor. They are the ones you fear.