for Demigod2/22/2019 c3 UncleBlackPanther
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
7/17/2018 c1 ShadowFire3473
Reviews mention terrible grammar, so your story is getting skipped. I'll check again another day though. Good luck.
Reviews mention terrible grammar, so your story is getting skipped. I'll check again another day though. Good luck.
5/21/2018 c1 Guest
Hurts to read
Hurts to read
5/20/2018 c3 anandpandey8896
Bro. ... Please use beta ... If you can not please let me reconstruct it...
Bro. ... Please use beta ... If you can not please let me reconstruct it...
5/19/2018 c1 Wut
Jesus christ the spelling and grammar on this thing is atrocious. Please for the love of god get a beta. It physically hurts me to even attempt to read this horrible writing.
Jesus christ the spelling and grammar on this thing is atrocious. Please for the love of god get a beta. It physically hurts me to even attempt to read this horrible writing.
5/19/2018 c2 Patirince
I love what you are doing with this story please continue and don't abandon it ... I was a little put off because of the length of the 2nd chapter was shorter than the first please make the next longer. Other than that it's great can't wait for more.
I love what you are doing with this story please continue and don't abandon it ... I was a little put off because of the length of the 2nd chapter was shorter than the first please make the next longer. Other than that it's great can't wait for more.
5/16/2018 c1 karadsumet
I want to see where you take this before i decide if its good or not. But do please update consistantly because i saw your other fics and its been so long since you updated. It doesnt fill me with confidence. Hope you write regularly.
I want to see where you take this before i decide if its good or not. But do please update consistantly because i saw your other fics and its been so long since you updated. It doesnt fill me with confidence. Hope you write regularly.