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2/22/2019 c3 UncleBlackPanther
A good story, and it has a very good plot. If you make a continuation or continue
the same story will be very cool and that the continuation is very makes you a great fanfic writer, and please continue the story.
7/17/2018 c1 ShadowFire3473
Reviews mention terrible grammar, so your story is getting skipped. I'll check again another day though. Good luck.
5/21/2018 c1 Guest
Hurts to read
5/20/2018 c3 bladetri
like XD
5/20/2018 c3 anandpandey8896
Bro. ... Please use beta ... If you can not please let me reconstruct it...
5/19/2018 c1 Wut
Jesus christ the spelling and grammar on this thing is atrocious. Please for the love of god get a beta. It physically hurts me to even attempt to read this horrible writing.
5/19/2018 c2 Patirince
I love what you are doing with this story please continue and don't abandon it ... I was a little put off because of the length of the 2nd chapter was shorter than the first please make the next longer. Other than that it's great can't wait for more.
5/17/2018 c2 bladetri
like XD
5/17/2018 c2 anandpandey8896
Keep it up
5/16/2018 c1 bladetri
like XD
5/16/2018 c1 ActualTurtle3
keep going ill like to way it goes
5/16/2018 c1 karadsumet
I want to see where you take this before i decide if its good or not. But do please update consistantly because i saw your other fics and its been so long since you updated. It doesnt fill me with confidence. Hope you write regularly.
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