for Sibling Rivalry Mix-Up6/27/2020 c7 durrendurrendol1993
you came back ! I liked the chapter, poor dipper and robbie are being used
you came back ! I liked the chapter, poor dipper and robbie are being used
12/17/2018 c5 
34Master Fan Reader
That is one interesting carnival. Wonder if they should have some sort of warning labels in the school brochure about what happens when you break the rules.
34Master Fan ReaderThat is one interesting carnival. Wonder if they should have some sort of warning labels in the school brochure about what happens when you break the rules.
11/20/2018 c4 nightmaster000
Brilliant chapter. I'm kinda of curious what Detention will be like in this kinda of school.
Brilliant chapter. I'm kinda of curious what Detention will be like in this kinda of school.
10/18/2018 c2 47Alisi Thorndyke
When Pyronica told Mabel that she had a twisted smile, I immediately thought she was channeling Catherine, who would have no issues doing harm to someone lol! The Wrath of Catherine and Nightmare in GF anyone? lol
My apologies for taking so long to review this. Life has kept me doing everything but relaxing. If I weren't studying, I am working. If I'm not preparing to take the boards, I am studying for my comp test (which I passed :D). I am preparing for the state board test now. Now I'm playing catch up with everything, including writing chapter 13 to my own story. But as soon as I can, I will catch up with your new story and the rest of this one. :)
Awesome job! :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
47Alisi ThorndykeWhen Pyronica told Mabel that she had a twisted smile, I immediately thought she was channeling Catherine, who would have no issues doing harm to someone lol! The Wrath of Catherine and Nightmare in GF anyone? lol
My apologies for taking so long to review this. Life has kept me doing everything but relaxing. If I weren't studying, I am working. If I'm not preparing to take the boards, I am studying for my comp test (which I passed :D). I am preparing for the state board test now. Now I'm playing catch up with everything, including writing chapter 13 to my own story. But as soon as I can, I will catch up with your new story and the rest of this one. :)
Awesome job! :)
Alisi Thorndyke :)
8/20/2018 c3 Master Fan Reader
Looks like both Mabel and Pacifica have their hearts set on returning to their original selves. Good work by the way.
Looks like both Mabel and Pacifica have their hearts set on returning to their original selves. Good work by the way.
7/7/2018 c3 nightmaster000
I have to say pretty interesting story and setting you've created here.
Trembly and the Hand Witch as a couple and the parents of Mabel and Pacifica is pretty original and interesting idea that's for sure.
I could actually see the two dating if they ever meet now that I think about it.
I have to say pretty interesting story and setting you've created here.
Trembly and the Hand Witch as a couple and the parents of Mabel and Pacifica is pretty original and interesting idea that's for sure.
I could actually see the two dating if they ever meet now that I think about it.
5/27/2018 c2 Master Fan Reader
Not bad. Though I don't see Robbie as someone who'd meet the criteria of the cloud castle. He'd be more of demon warrior or something like that in my opinion. Overall though, not the story is kind of interesting. Keep it up.
Not bad. Though I don't see Robbie as someone who'd meet the criteria of the cloud castle. He'd be more of demon warrior or something like that in my opinion. Overall though, not the story is kind of interesting. Keep it up.
5/17/2018 c1 47Alisi Thorndyke
Mabel and Cifica sisters? Even more so, they are practically in each other's bodies after a magick blow out! XD I can't wait to see where this leads! :)
However, I feel bad for Quinten, he could have done better...lol
Alisi Thorndyke
47Alisi ThorndykeMabel and Cifica sisters? Even more so, they are practically in each other's bodies after a magick blow out! XD I can't wait to see where this leads! :)
However, I feel bad for Quinten, he could have done better...lol
Alisi Thorndyke
5/16/2018 c1 1Wistfuldreams98
This is so beautiful beautiful and playful. You’re writing is amazing and I can’t wait to keep reading.
1Wistfuldreams98This is so beautiful beautiful and playful. You’re writing is amazing and I can’t wait to keep reading.