
7/13/2021 c3 Fogman66
Work on your spelling and this fic would be much easier to read than it is now.
Work on your spelling and this fic would be much easier to read than it is now.
10/6/2020 c8 Callum Runchman
I can understand asking for patience but this was a really interesting twist on GOT and was basically uniting the North and wildlings years before they came under threat, yet has been abandoned. The storyline had so much more to give but hasn't been touched for over 2 years and without an explanation which isn't cool. I would say the usual "please return" or "update soon" etc but I'm realistic enough to realise there is a minescule chance of this being renewed
I can understand asking for patience but this was a really interesting twist on GOT and was basically uniting the North and wildlings years before they came under threat, yet has been abandoned. The storyline had so much more to give but hasn't been touched for over 2 years and without an explanation which isn't cool. I would say the usual "please return" or "update soon" etc but I'm realistic enough to realise there is a minescule chance of this being renewed
8/23/2020 c2 Guest
Stupid fanfic
Stupid fanfic
8/23/2020 c1 Guest
IDIOT FANFIC TRASH!
IDIOT FANFIC TRASH!
6/5/2020 c8 Philip
Please continue!
It's great
Please continue!
It's great
6/5/2020 c1 Guest
Love it!
Love it!
2/5/2020 c8 Iiuu
I thought you said you would update Please I really like this Best fanfic ever!
I thought you said you would update Please I really like this Best fanfic ever!
6/7/2019 c8 orionastro
very good story so far, let's see defeating the Freys and Heading to Winterfell, to explain the great danger that his coming for all the living, can hardly wait for the next chapters.
very good story so far, let's see defeating the Freys and Heading to Winterfell, to explain the great danger that his coming for all the living, can hardly wait for the next chapters.
5/14/2019 c8
4eragon95159
Continue and update our girl demigods become good friends with arya stark (partialy She grow on Escape as demigod)and strong after win war with undead they change and little modernize world like in Naruto ( they have electric energy home Electronic and other usefull things byť Stilo use bows swords and other ancient weapons).

Continue and update our girl demigods become good friends with arya stark (partialy She grow on Escape as demigod)and strong after win war with undead they change and little modernize world like in Naruto ( they have electric energy home Electronic and other usefull things byť Stilo use bows swords and other ancient weapons).
12/20/2018 c8
2SuperIntellectualRedditor
This story has an interesting concept to it, I've always liked power-base stories. Undoubtedly though, you need to revise this story. It seems as if you've scratched the bare minimum of canon books/show. Ygritte isn't 7 ft f*cking tall, and the cannibals are called Thenns (at least in the show) not bloody Hornfoots.

This story has an interesting concept to it, I've always liked power-base stories. Undoubtedly though, you need to revise this story. It seems as if you've scratched the bare minimum of canon books/show. Ygritte isn't 7 ft f*cking tall, and the cannibals are called Thenns (at least in the show) not bloody Hornfoots.
9/10/2018 c4 Fhkdosoennskoaooqkkwnwnejospoe
Your poor grammar and inability to write in English is a shame to everyone that speaks it. Get a beta, use Grammarly, and stop using digits in place of words. It's pronounced "three", not "3".
Your poor grammar and inability to write in English is a shame to everyone that speaks it. Get a beta, use Grammarly, and stop using digits in place of words. It's pronounced "three", not "3".