for Delicate11/18/2018 c1 Guest
Pls update soon
Pls update soon
9/17/2018 c7 
26Relena for President
Oh, no! The drama! I actually love a good ol' missed connections scenario. Now we just need for the two of them to get on the same page already!
This chapter was a lot of fun overall. I enjoyed the return of stalker Relena (although poor girl needs a Xanax) and your version of Catherine was really fun! Can't wait for more... hope you update soon! This loyal 3xR will be waiting on pins and needles!
26Relena for PresidentOh, no! The drama! I actually love a good ol' missed connections scenario. Now we just need for the two of them to get on the same page already!
This chapter was a lot of fun overall. I enjoyed the return of stalker Relena (although poor girl needs a Xanax) and your version of Catherine was really fun! Can't wait for more... hope you update soon! This loyal 3xR will be waiting on pins and needles!
9/17/2018 c6 Relena for President
I'm kind of pissed at Trowa for just taking off on Relena like that! Very Heero-like of him :P But at least he's still thinking about her? Kinda? Come on Trowa, you can do better! We have men like Peter Kavinsky now so you'd better step it up! ;)
Anyway... on to the next!
I'm kind of pissed at Trowa for just taking off on Relena like that! Very Heero-like of him :P But at least he's still thinking about her? Kinda? Come on Trowa, you can do better! We have men like Peter Kavinsky now so you'd better step it up! ;)
Anyway... on to the next!
9/17/2018 c5 Relena for President
I am back for more mushiness, and this chapter did not disappoint! While the sudden switch to first person POV was a bit jarring, I actually prefer this to the third person. If I were you I might go back and revise the beginning of the story to match this style and maintain consistency throughout. It's nice to see both sides of the story here. But also be sure to watch your tenses... this chapter switched back and forth between past and present tense a lot. I feel like you were going more for first person, present tense to give this more of a sense of immediacy. I'm sure whatever you decide to do will end up working out fine... You're weaving quite a tale here and I'm enjoying every second :D We must continue to keep our crack ship afloat!
I am back for more mushiness, and this chapter did not disappoint! While the sudden switch to first person POV was a bit jarring, I actually prefer this to the third person. If I were you I might go back and revise the beginning of the story to match this style and maintain consistency throughout. It's nice to see both sides of the story here. But also be sure to watch your tenses... this chapter switched back and forth between past and present tense a lot. I feel like you were going more for first person, present tense to give this more of a sense of immediacy. I'm sure whatever you decide to do will end up working out fine... You're weaving quite a tale here and I'm enjoying every second :D We must continue to keep our crack ship afloat!
9/16/2018 c4 Relena for President
Finally, Relena got to see what Trowa had hiding underneath that turtleneck sweater... :D This was wickedly delightful to read and made me giddy. Thank you again for bringing more 3xR to the table! I just can't get enough *SOB*
Finally, Relena got to see what Trowa had hiding underneath that turtleneck sweater... :D This was wickedly delightful to read and made me giddy. Thank you again for bringing more 3xR to the table! I just can't get enough *SOB*
6/20/2018 c6 5Mistaken-Miracles
It’s very refreshing to see another 3xR making its way through this fandom. While I love me some Heero, I also love me some Trowa! _ There are so many great qualities to him that it’s hard not fall in love with him. Though I suspect Relena is finally figuring this out after, what was it, two years? What Relena really needs to do is take what has been handed to her and go with it. Girl enjoy you some Trowa too!
There’s only one thing that had me confused. Chapters 5 & 6, where you switched it up from a third person POV to a first person POV. Yes I did see that you noted who’s POV we were reading from, which helped because I was very confused at first, but why the change up? We’re you originally trying to write it from a first POV? Or was this done intentionally as apart of your plot?
Other than that, I do like the premise of this story and the fact Dorothy has wormed her way into it. I can only see her causin some trouble... Or does she actually plan to be a “good” friend in this situation? I guess we’ll have to wait and see!
5Mistaken-MiraclesIt’s very refreshing to see another 3xR making its way through this fandom. While I love me some Heero, I also love me some Trowa! _ There are so many great qualities to him that it’s hard not fall in love with him. Though I suspect Relena is finally figuring this out after, what was it, two years? What Relena really needs to do is take what has been handed to her and go with it. Girl enjoy you some Trowa too!
There’s only one thing that had me confused. Chapters 5 & 6, where you switched it up from a third person POV to a first person POV. Yes I did see that you noted who’s POV we were reading from, which helped because I was very confused at first, but why the change up? We’re you originally trying to write it from a first POV? Or was this done intentionally as apart of your plot?
Other than that, I do like the premise of this story and the fact Dorothy has wormed her way into it. I can only see her causin some trouble... Or does she actually plan to be a “good” friend in this situation? I guess we’ll have to wait and see!
5/20/2018 c2 26Relena for President
Well, I'm glad to see the 3xR ship is continuing to sail, and that the Taylor Swift effect is also in full effect here! I don't know why Tay Tay songs fit our fandom so well; they just do. I've loved this song since I first heard it, although it makes me think more of Heero and Relena ("Oh damn, never seen that color blue"), but I am interested to see how the narrative of the song continues to shape the story itself. The main thing is, I'm happy to see more 3xR fics out there in the world! Let's keep the trend going for a while, shall we? Just a bit of writing advice (can't help it, I'm an editor by trade) - this story shifts between tenses quite a bit; I would go back and edit to either stick with past or present tense. You see to have more of the past tense, so I would probably go with that, unless you happen to like first tense better; up to you! Otherwise, good start, and I look forward to seeing how this progresses!
26Relena for PresidentWell, I'm glad to see the 3xR ship is continuing to sail, and that the Taylor Swift effect is also in full effect here! I don't know why Tay Tay songs fit our fandom so well; they just do. I've loved this song since I first heard it, although it makes me think more of Heero and Relena ("Oh damn, never seen that color blue"), but I am interested to see how the narrative of the song continues to shape the story itself. The main thing is, I'm happy to see more 3xR fics out there in the world! Let's keep the trend going for a while, shall we? Just a bit of writing advice (can't help it, I'm an editor by trade) - this story shifts between tenses quite a bit; I would go back and edit to either stick with past or present tense. You see to have more of the past tense, so I would probably go with that, unless you happen to like first tense better; up to you! Otherwise, good start, and I look forward to seeing how this progresses!