for Heir of the Sage5/23 c4 GredFeorge
Ah yes listen to angy wahmen because angy wahmen scary and get to beat men because domestic violence is funny as long as the victim is male
Ah yes listen to angy wahmen because angy wahmen scary and get to beat men because domestic violence is funny as long as the victim is male
4/12 c18 Guest
Good read boss , can’t wait for next chapters
Good read boss , can’t wait for next chapters
3/22 c10 justau
So. A civilian schoolboy demonstrated reaction and ability to act quickly at a higher level than a shinobi trained since childhood. And not just any shinobi, but a shinobi with a sharingan. Moreover, this "shinobi" forgot henge (he only used it once, when the author needed to mimic Mystic). This "shinobi" also forgot kawarimi. Forgot that he can turn his clones into throwing weapons. Forgot about rasengan. Forgot about everything... Turning Naruto into such a nonentity in terms of combat is something special. Good job! :thumb_up:
So. A civilian schoolboy demonstrated reaction and ability to act quickly at a higher level than a shinobi trained since childhood. And not just any shinobi, but a shinobi with a sharingan. Moreover, this "shinobi" forgot henge (he only used it once, when the author needed to mimic Mystic). This "shinobi" also forgot kawarimi. Forgot that he can turn his clones into throwing weapons. Forgot about rasengan. Forgot about everything... Turning Naruto into such a nonentity in terms of combat is something special. Good job! :thumb_up:
3/22 c2 justau
Naruto is so worried about losing contact with his home village. So worried... That's probably why he never tried to summon the toads to send a message to Ero-Sage through them.
Naruto is so worried about losing contact with his home village. So worried... That's probably why he never tried to summon the toads to send a message to Ero-Sage through them.
3/19 c18 Guest
Excellent chapter I really really liked it I hope to see a new one soon
Excellent chapter I really really liked it I hope to see a new one soon
12/25 c2 Guest
Loving this story so far, only issue I've seen is that you put hear instead of here near the starts; Japanese over hear talk
Loving this story so far, only issue I've seen is that you put hear instead of here near the starts; Japanese over hear talk
2/25 c5 Guest
Kinda confused was there actually an alien invasion that the fantastic 4 defeated or is it Jonny just saying that to get some?
Kinda confused was there actually an alien invasion that the fantastic 4 defeated or is it Jonny just saying that to get some?
2/21 c1 HinataCreations
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left such a strong impression on me, and I’d love the chance to chat with you about it.
I’m a commission based digital artist with experience creating comics in collaboration with authors across various platforms. I genuinely believe your story would make an amazing comic, and I’d love to explore that possibility with you. I often find it challenging to reach out to authors and express my thoughts effectively, which is why I came across your profile and took the time to read your story.
Feel free to connect with me on Discord: comiccrazestudios
I just wanted to take a moment to let you know how much I admire your incredible writing talent. Your story left such a strong impression on me, and I’d love the chance to chat with you about it.
I’m a commission based digital artist with experience creating comics in collaboration with authors across various platforms. I genuinely believe your story would make an amazing comic, and I’d love to explore that possibility with you. I often find it challenging to reach out to authors and express my thoughts effectively, which is why I came across your profile and took the time to read your story.
Feel free to connect with me on Discord: comiccrazestudios
2/15 c1 Guest
Really amazing first chapter, though it seems weird that you mention Hagarono ‘shaping the multiverse’ then seem to abandon the topic
Really amazing first chapter, though it seems weird that you mention Hagarono ‘shaping the multiverse’ then seem to abandon the topic
1/28 c18 Panseco
Tengo que ser sincero tal vez tu hables inglés y yo español pero encontrarme con una historia como la que estás escribiendo fue algo muy y reafirmó “muy" increíble la complejidad con la q describes a cada personaje es sorprendente y como todo encaja ala perfección es increíble tu eres increíble, todas las mañanas que despierto unas de las primeras cosas q hago es revisar si se a actualizada tu historia gracias por momentos tan entretenidos y espero que no habandones la historia
Tengo que ser sincero tal vez tu hables inglés y yo español pero encontrarme con una historia como la que estás escribiendo fue algo muy y reafirmó “muy" increíble la complejidad con la q describes a cada personaje es sorprendente y como todo encaja ala perfección es increíble tu eres increíble, todas las mañanas que despierto unas de las primeras cosas q hago es revisar si se a actualizada tu historia gracias por momentos tan entretenidos y espero que no habandones la historia
1/15 c12 KaidoFett
What a shame this fic is like inches from being goated but your just hinting at naruto with susan ororo and jean and then just go and kill that momentum theres no fics with susan thats long smh
What a shame this fic is like inches from being goated but your just hinting at naruto with susan ororo and jean and then just go and kill that momentum theres no fics with susan thats long smh