
5/28/2018 c1
25EvenAtMyDarkest
I enjoyed this a lot more than most kid fics I've read. Love the imagination on these two. And the part about their smiles being brighter and harsher than the Santa Barbara sunlight was an inspired bit of analogy. Nicely done.

I enjoyed this a lot more than most kid fics I've read. Love the imagination on these two. And the part about their smiles being brighter and harsher than the Santa Barbara sunlight was an inspired bit of analogy. Nicely done.
5/18/2018 c1
19PrePsychPineappleLover
I love when you write little Shawn and Gus! :D
I could totally see this happening in a flashback!

I love when you write little Shawn and Gus! :D
I could totally see this happening in a flashback!