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All I can say is poor Maddi. No wonder she wants vengeance at the end. It's too early to deal with all the crazy, though I love how Thor just constantly wants to choke the life out of Loki. I laughed a bit at thst.
In general you're really good at setting a scene. You may tell me you don't have a flow in your writing or whatever, but I must disagree with you. It's easy to picture what's going on and ideas/dialogue flow naturally. You did good work. :)
All I can say is poor Maddi. No wonder she wants vengeance at the end. It's too early to deal with all the crazy, though I love how Thor just constantly wants to choke the life out of Loki. I laughed a bit at thst.
In general you're really good at setting a scene. You may tell me you don't have a flow in your writing or whatever, but I must disagree with you. It's easy to picture what's going on and ideas/dialogue flow naturally. You did good work. :)