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5/15/2019 c2 8Dear author
I love this. I love it so bad! Please update a lot. I just hope he doesn’t see much. It would ruin it if they find out all of her secrets!
4/15/2019 c2 Guest
YEEESSS I’ve finally found this story I’ve been looking for it for a year :( I started reading when you first started writing it, then you stopped and I lost track of it, but now your re-writing it which I’m so excited for, I really loved this story and now I’ll get to see a fresh view of it. So pumped for this :D
2/27/2019 c2 kostigan
Brilliant so far. Would love to see more.
2/19/2019 c1 thanzintay.2000
Oh my god it's back! Thanks you so much!
10/11/2018 c2 wolfstars
OMG I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS SO BAD

I love this fic so far! Hashira seems like a really cool character so far. I like how you've showed her to be somewhat adjusting to living in the ninja world, and also being part of the clan. I really hope to see her meeting other members soon!

Her relationships are also very intriguing - Yanemaru is such a cutie and the way he likes to pull & tug at her while she heroically endures is adorable. It's interesting to see how she interacts with her parents, and how each of them perceives her. I really hope her dad doesn't find out her secret, or worse, harm her :(

Overall, a great two chapters! I can't wait to see what happens next :D
9/18/2018 c2 chloemika
woah this is amazing!
9/1/2018 c2 4Happy-Momma-Of-Toby
pretty good, i'm interested as to what's gonna happen next.
8/29/2018 c2 begood
.god. I already am in love with this. Please give us some more ~ update soon!
7/3/2018 c2 5peccolia
You know, I really enjoy Biruda as a character. She’s so fun and upbeat and a good mom despite being a lil careless. But she and Kuro, they both play a close role in this story and in Hashira’s development. They’re also a cute couple! UGH they’re all so cute! Just a totally cute family. I love them all—I always love a good family fic. They’re really concerned for her… I feel a little bad that the things she does disheartens them, though. I mean, except Yanemaru. He's so cute and he loves Shi no matter what, it seems.

(Lol, Imagine Kishimoto being an oracle, predicting the stage for our future reincarnated lives—how terrifying. Tell him to take it back!)

Ooh, Hashira’s chakra situation is totally weird and worrying! Like, is she okay? What’s going on? Who’s doing this—is it her? The world? Is it genjutsu after all? Is she still sort of not fully tethered to this new world and drifting away at times? AH I gotta know!

(“The days flew by like arrows” is a choice line, by the way.)

IZUNA IS SO BRATTY. God, I love how you write the kids, they’re all so vibrant and fun. But, jeez, get Hashira’s name right for once, kid! He has some nerve. (Also, “You’re one?” I’m dying, Hashira’s humor is the best, she can definitely give Izuna the sass he deserves.) But as fun as meeting the little smug prince was, oh no! Hashira slipped up bad and now Dad knows she knows something she shouldn’t know! He won’t just leave it at that, he’ll tell Biruda and then they’ll have to figure out how to handle this situation. They’ll—they’ll. What. WHAT. WHAT? WHAT IS GOING ON AT THE END, HERE. Please tell me they’re helping her. Please tell me she’s not involved in some nefarious scheme! Is she okay? Is that Kuro? Is it someone else? I have to know! This was a really great chapter and I can’t wait for the next.
7/1/2018 c2 2Dark Rose Charm
So she is cold hearted then I don’t really like her personality much she is being too suspicious and that not very smart especially in that time but I am curious what will happen
6/21/2018 c2 Guest
Oh my gosh! I am so impatient to see how this develops! Like. What a frustrating situation. What can Hashira even do? Gah.
Thank you for the fantastic writing!
6/19/2018 c2 3readthishit
oh dear, hope this turns out well. honestly though i feel like her parents finding out she's a hella good sensor would explain most of the shit that's going on, ya know, aside from all that reincarnation stuff lol
6/14/2018 c2 2Temaki-dono
That's, uh, a nice dad you got there, Hashira. Although given the context of shinobi wars and infiltration and her just being really weird, it's sort of understandable. Not justifiable, but still.
A small suggestion: "Thanks to her surname, again." would probably be better as "Thanks, again, to her surname". "Again" is out of place at the end of the sentence, and there's no need for a period inside the parentheses.
6/14/2018 c1 Temaki-dono
Took me a while to come back, but I'm ready for round two!
Poor Hashira. Can't catch a break.
6/12/2018 c2 Guest
this chapter had me going from awwww that is adorable to shit she's busted in like 2 seconds. Great job!
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