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5/22/2018 c1 jotitoboy
Yes, history is back, thanks autor
5/21/2018 c1 2Abundant E
YESSSSSS WELL DONE! I know that a rewrite can be really difficult sometimes so congrats on getting the first chapter up!

ok so on to the actual chapter: when I heard Yanemarus name I was like oh shit I remember him! i remember him being a bit of a brat hahahaha and I’m glad to see that he still kind of is a brat! And Hashira. I love her passiveness to the whole situation but also how annoyed she is! I feel like I’d definitely react how she did

also liked the brief introduction to the parents! I think it was done well and I mean I’m not sure what to think of them, although tbh I love the father just because of the name Kuro idk I just know a lot of amazing characters called Kuro but I mean he did kind of knock his daughter out but that makes sense (maybe)

And I presume Hashira is something like a sensor-nin? Or just really sensitive to chakra? Either way I’m excited to see how that part develops!

really really good first chapter I can’t even describe and put into words how much your writing has improved! Like seriously. It’s insane. you should be so proud and I’m so freaking excited to see where this goes!
5/21/2018 c1 12Lucency
Looking forward to see what happens next!
5/21/2018 c1 Bisque-Ware
Such an interesting setting, I wonder how old she is in comparison to Madara and Hashirama.
5/21/2018 c1 2Dark Rose Charm
I am curious but seriously she need to stop being and ass but I wanna know what happen nexts and it’s uchiha just saying your messing up the spelling on it
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