for Reading in Germany9/20/2023 c1 RightnWrong
This is an interesting outline. If someone ever turns it into a nice story, hopefully you’ll update this with a link or name to such a story.
This is an interesting outline. If someone ever turns it into a nice story, hopefully you’ll update this with a link or name to such a story.
8/19/2022 c1 Vickety
Thank you!
Thank you!
5/14/2022 c1 
3mcepl
Very well done, but they are too passive: Hermione should somehow inform Harry about what was going on (she knew he is in danger), and Harry should be more aggressive against Weasleys intrusions.
3mceplVery well done, but they are too passive: Hermione should somehow inform Harry about what was going on (she knew he is in danger), and Harry should be more aggressive against Weasleys intrusions.
10/7/2021 c1 10brady66
Damn Hermione….you were certainly heartless and uncaring in this story. Just up and left Harry and didn’t even bother to tell him about the baby.
10brady66Damn Hermione….you were certainly heartless and uncaring in this story. Just up and left Harry and didn’t even bother to tell him about the baby.
9/27/2021 c1 erstwhile-S
While thrilled that Hermione assessed the danger and got herself out of there, it would’ve been even better had she let Harry know what was happening and let him make his own decisions. Maybe she recognised the huge risk in getting the message to Harry without anyone else getting to know. As it is, it was quite fortuitous for her that the NZ aurors were as alert as they were. Nicely done. Thanks.
While thrilled that Hermione assessed the danger and got herself out of there, it would’ve been even better had she let Harry know what was happening and let him make his own decisions. Maybe she recognised the huge risk in getting the message to Harry without anyone else getting to know. As it is, it was quite fortuitous for her that the NZ aurors were as alert as they were. Nicely done. Thanks.
9/4/2021 c1 mumphie
I was wondering why Hermione didn't want to tell Harry about being pregnant...why she thought so little of him.
I was wondering why Hermione didn't want to tell Harry about being pregnant...why she thought so little of him.
8/18/2021 c1 145Scififan33
With Harry's feelings on family, I would have expected some anger on his part at Hermione vanishing with his unborn child without a word. To not contact him at all about it is a betrayal, Dobby would have surely taken a note. even a note saying why she left or something sent after she left so it couldn't be tracked, he deserved at least that much. So don't have a high opinion of her or her family in this. I liked the Hogwarts girls rallying around him to protect him better than this version of Hermione, not like Harry would have said no to her leaving to protect herself and their child.
145Scififan33With Harry's feelings on family, I would have expected some anger on his part at Hermione vanishing with his unborn child without a word. To not contact him at all about it is a betrayal, Dobby would have surely taken a note. even a note saying why she left or something sent after she left so it couldn't be tracked, he deserved at least that much. So don't have a high opinion of her or her family in this. I liked the Hogwarts girls rallying around him to protect him better than this version of Hermione, not like Harry would have said no to her leaving to protect herself and their child.