for One Piece OC Arc: Dressrosa7/8/2023 c3 Guest
Is this story on hiatus? Amazing story by the way
Is this story on hiatus? Amazing story by the way
12/31/2022 c3 caleb hagg
So, I've been thinking about when will it be more chapters about this story, because I would like to know more.
So, I've been thinking about when will it be more chapters about this story, because I would like to know more.
9/12/2022 c3 Caleb Hagg
Please more chapters about this story, ok?
Please more chapters about this story, ok?
2/18/2020 c3 Guest
YOU MAD MAN YOU TURNED DIMO INTO A TO5 THE USER OF THE PICTO PICTO NO MI CAPTAIN OF COLOUR CARNIVAL IS A FUCKING RACE CAR NO WONDER ELLIX HASN'T ASKED ANNA ABOUT THE OTHERS
YOU MAD MAN YOU TURNED DIMO INTO A TO5 THE USER OF THE PICTO PICTO NO MI CAPTAIN OF COLOUR CARNIVAL IS A FUCKING RACE CAR NO WONDER ELLIX HASN'T ASKED ANNA ABOUT THE OTHERS
2/17/2020 c3 Guest
OK I think I have a theory on this. So ellix is a relative or child of a close family friend to kuma but with us now knowing kuma was king of the sorbet kingdom with bonnie this means that he might be royalty. Think about it ellix is in dressrosa hugging someone with an hourglass figure. It's either violet or Rebecca this could mean that,hear me out. Ellix is part of the riku family
OK I think I have a theory on this. So ellix is a relative or child of a close family friend to kuma but with us now knowing kuma was king of the sorbet kingdom with bonnie this means that he might be royalty. Think about it ellix is in dressrosa hugging someone with an hourglass figure. It's either violet or Rebecca this could mean that,hear me out. Ellix is part of the riku family
7/11/2019 c3 savagemaster1999
i really wanna know ellix past and doflamingo connection to it please update this story.
i really wanna know ellix past and doflamingo connection to it please update this story.
11/8/2018 c3 Guest
Diazr9999
Opfan37 I want apologize for my behavior and for acting like a spammer to you and I hope that you can forgive me for behavior and for acting like a baby and I hope you can let me review your stories that’s all I ask no more dumb pms just reviews and hope you can forgive me and I hope you get well soon
Diazr9999
Opfan37 I want apologize for my behavior and for acting like a spammer to you and I hope that you can forgive me for behavior and for acting like a baby and I hope you can let me review your stories that’s all I ask no more dumb pms just reviews and hope you can forgive me and I hope you get well soon
11/8/2018 c3 Guest
Diazr9999
Please I’m really am sorry I just want to review your stories (sniff)(sobbing)
Diazr9999
Please I’m really am sorry I just want to review your stories (sniff)(sobbing)
6/26/2018 c3 Guest
Im loving this story so far considering I didn't really like the arc
Im loving this story so far considering I didn't really like the arc
6/20/2018 c3 
5KP360
It's an interesting way to establish a character through a previous, unseen portion an expand on them later. James Night is pretty mysterious from the way you portrayed him in this chapter. Really easy going and slightly different from most of the Blackbeard Pirates while still keeping to a general theme. I guess it's hard to expand further considering the entire crew minus Teach didn't really have a whole lot of build-up.
G: Speaking of Teach, whatever happened to him? I haven't seen him in a while.
Trust me, the next time you see him it's gonna suck.
G: Whoa, that's dark. Anyway we both got a question for Ellix here, we picked it together.
You mean I picked it and you just bandwagoned?
G: Details, details. We'd like to ask Ellix about his friendship with Vivi during her time with the crew! What were the high points and low points up until she got to Alabasta? Wow, I really miss having her around.
At least she's back now
5KP360It's an interesting way to establish a character through a previous, unseen portion an expand on them later. James Night is pretty mysterious from the way you portrayed him in this chapter. Really easy going and slightly different from most of the Blackbeard Pirates while still keeping to a general theme. I guess it's hard to expand further considering the entire crew minus Teach didn't really have a whole lot of build-up.
G: Speaking of Teach, whatever happened to him? I haven't seen him in a while.
Trust me, the next time you see him it's gonna suck.
G: Whoa, that's dark. Anyway we both got a question for Ellix here, we picked it together.
You mean I picked it and you just bandwagoned?
G: Details, details. We'd like to ask Ellix about his friendship with Vivi during her time with the crew! What were the high points and low points up until she got to Alabasta? Wow, I really miss having her around.
At least she's back now
6/14/2018 c3 Vergil Leonidas
Good chapter, there was some set up with CP0 there and a few things to note such as Ellix's reaction. However the biggest moment was the appearance of James Night, he's an... interesting character so to speak and I'd like to see where you're planing to take him.
Vergil: Interesting for you Author, to me he just seems like a dangerous foe.
You're eager to get to more powerful opponents in your own story, aren't you?
V: Of course I am.
Well, I figured as much. Either way I enjoyed the chapter and with that I guess I'll conclude the-
V: Wait now Author, I have a question. Ellix when, during the voyage, did you feel the worst? What event affected you the most? Feel free to name a few if you want to.
And now I can conclude the review.
Good chapter, there was some set up with CP0 there and a few things to note such as Ellix's reaction. However the biggest moment was the appearance of James Night, he's an... interesting character so to speak and I'd like to see where you're planing to take him.
Vergil: Interesting for you Author, to me he just seems like a dangerous foe.
You're eager to get to more powerful opponents in your own story, aren't you?
V: Of course I am.
Well, I figured as much. Either way I enjoyed the chapter and with that I guess I'll conclude the-
V: Wait now Author, I have a question. Ellix when, during the voyage, did you feel the worst? What event affected you the most? Feel free to name a few if you want to.
And now I can conclude the review.
6/14/2018 c3 Chronicle Titan
Thank you for indulging my request
Thank you for indulging my request
6/14/2018 c3 Hawkeye
I know for a fact that ellix is gonna compete in the colosseum and it's gonna be awesome I can't wait to see how he goes all out with the other fighters and I can't wait for more ellix and nami romance scene keep it up
I know for a fact that ellix is gonna compete in the colosseum and it's gonna be awesome I can't wait to see how he goes all out with the other fighters and I can't wait for more ellix and nami romance scene keep it up