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4/4/2022 c17 Aedwards179
yeah no reason for Naruto to kill all of them. that was just a useless plot point.
4/4/2022 c18 Aedwards179
kushina and Itachi shouldn't have many problems at all. they're both S rank Shinobi. and that dude he brought for Itachi was barely A rank in the anime
4/4/2022 c17 Aedwards179
damn he forgave her way too quickly.
4/4/2022 c14 Aedwards179
God damnit no incest please.
4/4/2022 c14 Aedwards179
ah damn I love shisui don't make him the enemy. I'd much rather have him alive than Itachi. he was precious.
4/4/2022 c13 Aedwards179
wait. in the last chapter he literally told Naruto the truth before kushina figured it out. why is it changed now?
4/4/2022 c11 Aedwards179
chakra chains mixed with the sharingan is an OP combination.
4/4/2022 c10 Aedwards179
damn so Naruto has, senju (The first uzumaki was a senju so they probably still have senju genes in them) uzumaki, Uchiha and namikaze blood. 3 of them are known for their large and dense chakra. the other their eyes. he's gonna be a chakra monster even without the fox.
4/4/2022 c5 Aedwards179
I mean, the kyuubi part in Naruto has no real power. there's no chakra. and the kyuubi is just a beast made of chakra. so all it is is an annoying voice in his head
4/4/2022 c1 Aedwards179
He could just say he only split it into 2 parts. or he took the 3rd part with him. there's no reason to tell the council about Naruto.
4/4/2022 c3 Aedwards179
I've always wondered why having a spy network won't let jiraya raise Naruto in these fanfics. he can leave him with the toads in their realm when he's busy doing spy stuff and have him with him the rest of the time.
4/4/2022 c1 Aedwards179
Minato would have to be like 40ish when Naruto is born in this timeline. the fight was like 50-60 years before cannon...
3/14/2022 c1 Luffy Namikaze
I like the plot of the story and hiruzen taking minato final wishes seriously but I mean come on why you got to do my girl kushina like that she realistically is probably the last person to call him a demon but I will not criticize your story and will continue to read it’s just tough to read kushina being mean to naruto sometimes because all I can think about is the manga and anime where she loved him with all her heart
3/11/2022 c17 reidosgames88
spoil everything
2/1/2022 c42 PsychoStorys
still no rewrite... sad
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