for The rebirth of the yellow flash4/4/2022 c3 Aedwards179
I've always wondered why having a spy network won't let jiraya raise Naruto in these fanfics. he can leave him with the toads in their realm when he's busy doing spy stuff and have him with him the rest of the time.
I've always wondered why having a spy network won't let jiraya raise Naruto in these fanfics. he can leave him with the toads in their realm when he's busy doing spy stuff and have him with him the rest of the time.
4/4/2022 c1 Aedwards179
Minato would have to be like 40ish when Naruto is born in this timeline. the fight was like 50-60 years before cannon...
Minato would have to be like 40ish when Naruto is born in this timeline. the fight was like 50-60 years before cannon...
3/14/2022 c1 Luffy Namikaze
I like the plot of the story and hiruzen taking minato final wishes seriously but I mean come on why you got to do my girl kushina like that she realistically is probably the last person to call him a demon but I will not criticize your story and will continue to read it’s just tough to read kushina being mean to naruto sometimes because all I can think about is the manga and anime where she loved him with all her heart
I like the plot of the story and hiruzen taking minato final wishes seriously but I mean come on why you got to do my girl kushina like that she realistically is probably the last person to call him a demon but I will not criticize your story and will continue to read it’s just tough to read kushina being mean to naruto sometimes because all I can think about is the manga and anime where she loved him with all her heart
12/20/2021 c1 Checkmate28
the start of the story reminds me abit of "legacy by Cr4zypt" really good by the way
the start of the story reminds me abit of "legacy by Cr4zypt" really good by the way
11/5/2021 c1 Whod
Having the very first word of the story be a major character's name misspelled really makes it seem like the writer doesn't care, the writing will be very poor, the author is rushing so quick they never bothered to re-read so much as the first line, or they don't know the name of a major character in their story. I could understand even the first line or paragraph, but the very first word is pretty laughable. Either way it's a clear sign the story isn't worth reading.
Having the very first word of the story be a major character's name misspelled really makes it seem like the writer doesn't care, the writing will be very poor, the author is rushing so quick they never bothered to re-read so much as the first line, or they don't know the name of a major character in their story. I could understand even the first line or paragraph, but the very first word is pretty laughable. Either way it's a clear sign the story isn't worth reading.
10/19/2021 c42 erikxsakura
Siendo sincero, espero que esta serie vuelva es muy buena y por como veo lo que se le viene a Naruto sera muy interesante, con respecto al nuevo novio de Kushina seria un poco serio y divertido de relleno mantenerlo vigilado, solo por las dudas :)
Siendo sincero, espero que esta serie vuelva es muy buena y por como veo lo que se le viene a Naruto sera muy interesante, con respecto al nuevo novio de Kushina seria un poco serio y divertido de relleno mantenerlo vigilado, solo por las dudas :)
10/17/2021 c42 
1Lucifer Roosevelt
Tbh, you really have a knack for powerhouse character. But if i may to comment, the character developments are rather.. what should i say? Too fast? I dunno, i really not good with english, cause it's not my main language, so i'm sorry I could not describe it at its best.
Oh also i love the pairing, tbh i love samui, she's like second hinata even though people usually referring shion as second hinata but i love samui more because her racks lol. Sorry my perverseness get a better of me. Although i quite enjoy your story even after all this years, i found it to be too fast too, for the plot especially. I don't mind your story lenght for each chapter, every author have their own way. And yeah i agree about forgiving kushina also sooo boring tbh, need some problem here and there, make a grand climax and i'll be your fans waiting for your another story, especially in naruto fandom. Oh i also like naruto x highschool dxd, it couldn't hurt to try, don't you think?
1Lucifer RooseveltTbh, you really have a knack for powerhouse character. But if i may to comment, the character developments are rather.. what should i say? Too fast? I dunno, i really not good with english, cause it's not my main language, so i'm sorry I could not describe it at its best.
Oh also i love the pairing, tbh i love samui, she's like second hinata even though people usually referring shion as second hinata but i love samui more because her racks lol. Sorry my perverseness get a better of me. Although i quite enjoy your story even after all this years, i found it to be too fast too, for the plot especially. I don't mind your story lenght for each chapter, every author have their own way. And yeah i agree about forgiving kushina also sooo boring tbh, need some problem here and there, make a grand climax and i'll be your fans waiting for your another story, especially in naruto fandom. Oh i also like naruto x highschool dxd, it couldn't hurt to try, don't you think?
10/8/2021 c1 lamthai316
MadaraI lost the first vs my best friend and was forced to flee. LOL
You must be a teenager or at least have the mentality as one.
MadaraI lost the first vs my best friend and was forced to flee. LOL
You must be a teenager or at least have the mentality as one.
8/19/2021 c1 Anonymous
Baka the hiraishin was invented by tobirama and optimized by minato
Baka the hiraishin was invented by tobirama and optimized by minato