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10/19 c1 dragonfox123
Amazing idea and can’t wait for the next chapter chapter
12/8/2020 c1 You
Hey wassup, A lot of people would like to see the prototype fic you wrote a while ago. Are there any plans for updates for it, is it dead, or are you busy?
3/22/2020 c1 HAIL KING DELIRIOUS
Update please this is awesome
11/26/2019 c1 2AceLegends
This was a great starting chapter, and I'll definitely read the next one if and when it comes out. Not sure how the amnesia thing is gonna work out, but if it weren't for that there'd be nothing stopping Summer from just going back to her family, which might limit the interactions she can have with Archer. Looking forward to the next chapter, if this fic is still updating.
7/29/2019 c1 4Lord of Moons
Archers projections don't decay. Technically they aren't created using gradation air, but tracing, Shirous unique magecraft which is basically gradation air taken to the extreme. It even fools the world in how accurate it is. While this might not be the case with faulty projections of Divine Noble Phantasms, since they have materials not known to man, we know this because in the Visual Novel the traced junk in his workshop has been there for years, and Rin gets confused when he tells her since projections made by gradation air are faulty and decay in a day or so usually. It's also a very basic magecraft.

The problem with having Gaia be the antagonist in this is that Dust was created to help humanity which since it's underground I doubt Alaya could do. Also the planet is called Remnant because humanity became a remnant of what it once was after betraying the brother gods. Alaya and Gaia would still affect the world, but Alaya likely would have been weakened by the brother gods destroying humanity and taking away the new humans magic, and Gaia would only act if something threatened the planet since the Grimm don't do much damage to wildlife apart from territorial fighting.
4/13/2019 c1 Guest
Please update
11/20/2018 c1 Boblets
Already lost interest because of the amnesia bullshit.
8/13/2018 c1 SentinalSlice
Hope to see more soon, and I hope Summer gets her memories back. What is it with people being saved by Avalon also suffering from memory loss? :)
Anyways, keep up the great work!
8/12/2018 c1 PasiveNox
Hahahaha epic
7/18/2018 c1 NomadicNine
Looks good so far, it would be amusing if Archer became some sort of Uncle Figure for others. Though seeing at how jaded, cynical and bitter he is, people will have to try and help him stop being so.
7/8/2018 c1 Ashalim
Look promising dude. Keep it up
7/7/2018 c1 2Diaspared
Amnesia-laden plots can turn frustrating very quickly.

You're a fine writer, but still, be very careful, eh?
6/13/2018 c1 10DarkManta
good
6/8/2018 c1 ivan0061509
this is good I can't wait for more
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