
6/10/2021 c8
1Noveisadoge
I know it's unfinished, but I couldn't resist a re-read. I 100% glossed over the sciency bits during my initial perusal, and I definitely enjoyed that this time aroundthank you for an interesting and unique read! I love it, and I'll read if or when you update

I know it's unfinished, but I couldn't resist a re-read. I 100% glossed over the sciency bits during my initial perusal, and I definitely enjoyed that this time aroundthank you for an interesting and unique read! I love it, and I'll read if or when you update
10/28/2020 c8 dappledsunbeams
Wahhhhh it is all so good, I love it! Take your time but I will be following in hopes of updates :)
Wahhhhh it is all so good, I love it! Take your time but I will be following in hopes of updates :)
6/20/2020 c8 Guest
What are the chances of another chapter? This story is sooo good!
What are the chances of another chapter? This story is sooo good!
9/19/2019 c8 Guest
Please update
Please update
7/11/2019 c8 palmtreehead
Wowser- sad content but amazingly written chapter. I quite like the way you had Kanae following Kyoko and the idea Kanae had to be the one to punch Sho cos Kyoko couldn’t conceive of it. I also loved Thompson’s protectiveness - thanks for sharing
Wowser- sad content but amazingly written chapter. I quite like the way you had Kanae following Kyoko and the idea Kanae had to be the one to punch Sho cos Kyoko couldn’t conceive of it. I also loved Thompson’s protectiveness - thanks for sharing
7/11/2019 c7 palmtreehead
You are doing a great job on the science- I know enough to find it very annoying when an author has clearly not bothered to check their facts. This is a very clever sci-fi and I love learning new stuff in your author notes. Thanks for sharing!
You are doing a great job on the science- I know enough to find it very annoying when an author has clearly not bothered to check their facts. This is a very clever sci-fi and I love learning new stuff in your author notes. Thanks for sharing!
2/12/2019 c8
1The Real Jackie-O
this is so well thought out! I love it! please keep up the good work!

this is so well thought out! I love it! please keep up the good work!
1/19/2019 c8 Guest
Loved it can hardly wait until the next chapter post great job
Loved it can hardly wait until the next chapter post great job
12/28/2018 c8 muchachomomo
This is such an interesting plot and your storytelling is phenomenal! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for us next :)
This is such an interesting plot and your storytelling is phenomenal! Can't wait to see what you've got in store for us next :)
12/15/2018 c8 Guest
Firstly I say happy holidays to you, and please post new chapter loving this story
Firstly I say happy holidays to you, and please post new chapter loving this story
11/8/2018 c8 The Fall of Spring
I am extremely tempted to try to draw the imagery that that last line induces.
I am extremely tempted to try to draw the imagery that that last line induces.
10/12/2018 c8 Guest
i don't know what to say! This chapter was packed with feels and every scene was amazingly written! And Sho, that bastard! He fits every sign of an emotional abuser; he's initially charming and then becomes controllling, manipulative, isolating and tries to lower her view on herself. But I loved how protective Kanae was towards her and I like Thompson and Annya even more now! Please keep up the good work!
i don't know what to say! This chapter was packed with feels and every scene was amazingly written! And Sho, that bastard! He fits every sign of an emotional abuser; he's initially charming and then becomes controllling, manipulative, isolating and tries to lower her view on herself. But I loved how protective Kanae was towards her and I like Thompson and Annya even more now! Please keep up the good work!
10/12/2018 c8
94oxybry
This Sho is awful, really you made a great job, it's hard not to hate him, for the love of god, the guy is an assh...e. So many hurtful things in a few lines... But is his appearance that shows us that despite every attempt of Kyoko to shut down others, she is not alone, she has a group of people who cares and stand by her.
Btw, the settings, attention to the detail and work you put in your story is amazing.

This Sho is awful, really you made a great job, it's hard not to hate him, for the love of god, the guy is an assh...e. So many hurtful things in a few lines... But is his appearance that shows us that despite every attempt of Kyoko to shut down others, she is not alone, she has a group of people who cares and stand by her.
Btw, the settings, attention to the detail and work you put in your story is amazing.