for Fires of the Forge9/20/2019 c1 Eliwood
Shirou: Also, I can create weapons that break all the rules(pun intended).
Shirou: Also, I can create weapons that break all the rules(pun intended).
6/24/2019 c1 kekekekek
imagine if
Shirou:i can also produce weapons that can erase an entire city with one swing
imagine if
Shirou:i can also produce weapons that can erase an entire city with one swing
9/3/2018 c1 
17EmeraldGuardian7
This was interesting, however it did feel a tad rushed. I think it would be even better if drawn out a little more. I'll agree with the other reviewer that Shirou seemed to almost be boasting about his tragic backstory. I don't believe that was your intention so maybe just a little rewording there could help give it a different angle. Lastly, I really don't like the slap. It's a trope used a lot in anime but having characters get physically violent with each other over these kinds of simple issues is not ok and shouldn't be normalized. She was out of line there.
Other than that, I liked it a lot. Hope my review didnt come off as too negative, I just like to offer advice where I can. I hope you do decide to continue this one day.
17EmeraldGuardian7This was interesting, however it did feel a tad rushed. I think it would be even better if drawn out a little more. I'll agree with the other reviewer that Shirou seemed to almost be boasting about his tragic backstory. I don't believe that was your intention so maybe just a little rewording there could help give it a different angle. Lastly, I really don't like the slap. It's a trope used a lot in anime but having characters get physically violent with each other over these kinds of simple issues is not ok and shouldn't be normalized. She was out of line there.
Other than that, I liked it a lot. Hope my review didnt come off as too negative, I just like to offer advice where I can. I hope you do decide to continue this one day.
8/6/2018 c1 Guest
Shirou kind of seemed to be flaunting around his tragic backstory a bit much in this chapter as well as making too many assumptions. Other than that, great story. It has good potential.
Shirou kind of seemed to be flaunting around his tragic backstory a bit much in this chapter as well as making too many assumptions. Other than that, great story. It has good potential.
5/31/2018 c1 Guest
It's a good story. I would like it if you continued.
It's a good story. I would like it if you continued.