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6/2/2018 c1 43BenRG
It's amazing how quickly one gets used to things. Even if the things in question are living in constant terror under the iron boot of a military dictatorship.
5/30/2018 c1 35ChocolateTeapot
This is an interesting idea! Opening with her thoughts about her past “criminality” was good at creating tension.

My one slight criticism is that the wait that felt like it lasted hours didn’t really get enough weight in my opinion.

Her relief at being allowed to leave and the unhappy realisation that she would have to pass through the checkpoint again was a really good ending.
5/30/2018 c1 62Kondoru
This is what happens to the public when the Rebels get loose.

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