for Perfect5/30/2018 c1 Guest
You should space out the lines, especially when people talk—it makes your story look more presentable and organized.
You should space out the lines, especially when people talk—it makes your story look more presentable and organized.
5/31/2018 c1 
4Mythical Potato
That was so cute, I especially love the ending! You did such a good job at portraying the characters, this whole thing was just perfect!
4Mythical PotatoThat was so cute, I especially love the ending! You did such a good job at portraying the characters, this whole thing was just perfect!