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21coincidencless
Wait, how in the WORLD could a garden world evolve around a white dwarf?!
21coincidenclessWait, how in the WORLD could a garden world evolve around a white dwarf?!
10/12/2019 c6 Impatientreader
I hope you can update enough that we get to the part where the council will react to humanity's and the faunus' history
I hope you can update enough that we get to the part where the council will react to humanity's and the faunus' history
9/3/2019 c6 HonestOutlaw
He's really not he was a general in his life as Ozma, and a leader of a shadow group that protected humanity for millennia. He just has issues with trust due to him most likely having been betrayed many times before.
He's really not he was a general in his life as Ozma, and a leader of a shadow group that protected humanity for millennia. He just has issues with trust due to him most likely having been betrayed many times before.
8/26/2019 c6 matthew116
why do so many fics have Ozpine as a great leader? when he is pretty bad at leadership to the point of incompetent.
why do so many fics have Ozpine as a great leader? when he is pretty bad at leadership to the point of incompetent.
8/21/2019 c6 3The Prime Cronos
Hi there, first i would like to point out you wrote laira instead of liara in the first sentence. Second, awesome and thumbs up you Stick with the Story!
Since we finally know salem's and ospin's history, Do you want to use These in your Story as Well or find a diffrent reason for Salem to be evil or at least the adversary to ospin? Because even in the Show i still don't fully understand Salem's Motivation. Yes she hates the gods, yes she Fell into the Black gue of the Black dragon to kill herself, but to use that to make her "evil because she poisenedherself" is just lame. Nö one can relate to that.
Keep UP the great work, it's always fun to See stories progressing.
3The Prime CronosHi there, first i would like to point out you wrote laira instead of liara in the first sentence. Second, awesome and thumbs up you Stick with the Story!
Since we finally know salem's and ospin's history, Do you want to use These in your Story as Well or find a diffrent reason for Salem to be evil or at least the adversary to ospin? Because even in the Show i still don't fully understand Salem's Motivation. Yes she hates the gods, yes she Fell into the Black gue of the Black dragon to kill herself, but to use that to make her "evil because she poisenedherself" is just lame. Nö one can relate to that.
Keep UP the great work, it's always fun to See stories progressing.
8/20/2019 c6 Guest
Love this
Love this
8/19/2019 c6 12TheGunmaster
So I'm assuming all roads lead to Rannock for Salem then? Maybe even Sovereign?
12TheGunmasterSo I'm assuming all roads lead to Rannock for Salem then? Maybe even Sovereign?
8/19/2019 c6 anthony11899
Was a good chapter, can't wait for the next one. did notice you misspell liara's name once, but other then that, your really good at writing to me.
Was a good chapter, can't wait for the next one. did notice you misspell liara's name once, but other then that, your really good at writing to me.