11/21/2009 c2 Ravenna Frost
Um, Tutankhamen;s tomb, much? What Thatz says is close to what Howard Carter said, if not the same thing.
Um, Tutankhamen;s tomb, much? What Thatz says is close to what Howard Carter said, if not the same thing.
10/10/2004 c6 68Kagome-reincarnation
cool! It's OK..I only have seven reviews total out of three writings...
cool! It's OK..I only have seven reviews total out of three writings...
8/29/2004 c6 Eikou
That was a very interesting story, but I believe earlier, you said this written for a class. How was that done? Thank you for the good story.
That was a very interesting story, but I believe earlier, you said this written for a class. How was that done? Thank you for the good story.
6/19/2004 c3 7sh4mesh4me
Really nice imagery with the Rune-jumping-out-of-window thing... Perfect chapter, save that I would have had Thatz shove Rune out instead of a demon... So I like Thatz x Rune... so what?
Really nice imagery with the Rune-jumping-out-of-window thing... Perfect chapter, save that I would have had Thatz shove Rune out instead of a demon... So I like Thatz x Rune... so what?
6/19/2004 c2 sh4mesh4me
What does Thatz see that's so amazing?
And my answer is:
Rune, of course!
...Because everyone _knew_ Thatz had a _huge_ crush on Rune.
On to the next chapter!
What does Thatz see that's so amazing?
And my answer is:
Rune, of course!
...Because everyone _knew_ Thatz had a _huge_ crush on Rune.
On to the next chapter!
6/19/2004 c1 sh4mesh4me
Hi! You reviewed my story and you sounded pretty intelligent, so I decided to read your story! It's really good, and I especially like the whole legend-of-the-flute thing. I'm going to shut up though now, and go read the next chapter!
Hi! You reviewed my story and you sounded pretty intelligent, so I decided to read your story! It's really good, and I especially like the whole legend-of-the-flute thing. I'm going to shut up though now, and go read the next chapter!
7/11/2003 c6 6Sam Baku
I'll rent both rath and thats plese! *giggles insanly* *mwah* congradulations on finishing your first chappter fic! I'm still trying to do that... ^^;
*claps hands* I shall be looking to see if you write anymore stories.
Ja
I'll rent both rath and thats plese! *giggles insanly* *mwah* congradulations on finishing your first chappter fic! I'm still trying to do that... ^^;
*claps hands* I shall be looking to see if you write anymore stories.
Ja
6/25/2003 c1 6wulfiesacolyte
Well, stories written in present tense tend to annoy me, but that's up to the disgression of the author. The story itself seems a bit dialogue-heavy...perhaps a bit more description of what the characters are doing while they talk would ease the problem. The prologue, though a bit rushed, was beautiful. Nice idea.
I'll be sure to read more.
Well, stories written in present tense tend to annoy me, but that's up to the disgression of the author. The story itself seems a bit dialogue-heavy...perhaps a bit more description of what the characters are doing while they talk would ease the problem. The prologue, though a bit rushed, was beautiful. Nice idea.
I'll be sure to read more.
6/25/2003 c6 4Neo-Kitty
That was a good idea for an ending. I liked how you used the dragon eyes. Also I'll rent Rath if you don't mind. He has always been my favorite though he is quite mean at times. What do I owe you and how soon can I have him? Next time you post let me know 'kay! See ya soon!
That was a good idea for an ending. I liked how you used the dragon eyes. Also I'll rent Rath if you don't mind. He has always been my favorite though he is quite mean at times. What do I owe you and how soon can I have him? Next time you post let me know 'kay! See ya soon!
6/23/2003 c5 wingnut
*chuckles* Great! Fascinating story, hope you continue! *grins*
*chuckles* Great! Fascinating story, hope you continue! *grins*