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4/23/2019 c8 1TheGreatBubbaJ
Banter
4/23/2019 c7 TheGreatBubbaJ
Good work Momo.
4/23/2019 c6 TheGreatBubbaJ
Little section there where you slip into first person. Nice chapter.
4/23/2019 c5 TheGreatBubbaJ
Probably some gala or something.
4/22/2019 c9 5Jack Redhawke
Idk man his level of vindictiveness and almost cruelty is I think too much, like I don’t think Tony was ever that much of a dick, and it’s weird to how he goes from this this light hearted snarky guy, or incredibly focused nerd to this staggeringly conceited and hateful jackass. Like wtf, he goes kinda like a worse Neji from Naruto, except only believing hard work matters and your gifts mean nothing instead of the other way around. It just feels like way too much
4/22/2019 c4 1TheGreatBubbaJ
Merciless showboating. Nice.
4/22/2019 c7 5Jack Redhawke
Like I get how he’s surprised at how well he did, but he even said to himself in an earlier chapter during the exam that he only acted that way because he figured he wouldn’t be in class with any of the other people testing with him. The bit in the quirk evaluation just feels a little forced
4/22/2019 c6 Jack Redhawke
Never do OchakoXBakugo, only villains go for that
4/22/2019 c5 Jack Redhawke
In the beginning of chapter 4 you call him issei instead of Izuku, and several times in 4 and 5 so far you type Ashida instead of Ashido
4/22/2019 c3 1TheGreatBubbaJ
Suppose since they aren't from the same middle school they can end up in the same zone.
4/21/2019 c10 bladetri
like XD
4/21/2019 c10 67Mrotrax
Perfecto!
Although you did make me fear Inko in that last little bit
4/21/2019 c9 Mrotrax
Damn goo chapter!
Izuku helping Mineta out while still pointing out his strengths and a refreshing change to the test
Looking forward to more
4/21/2019 c2 1TheGreatBubbaJ
Wonder how schooling was for him. How will Mei react to all this.
4/21/2019 c10 2Whitetiger789
Awesome story so far.
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