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2/8/2020 c1 31Born-Of-Elven-Blood
Okay, I was wrong, this is the saddest thing I ever read. Ah, my poor feels! Gorgeous and tragic and bittersweet. Thanks for sharing this!
1/10/2020 c1 18helloitskrisha
This is so profoundly sad and yet so beautiful. Erik imagining the mannequin saying that she loved him and would never leave him hurt my heart in the best possible way. Lovely, poetic writing!
9/16/2019 c1 9A Love Poet at Heart
this too I love and is cannon
9/12/2019 c1 82Starwatcher2018
You captured his tortured loneliness really well.
6/17/2018 c1 21Pensez-a-Erik
These are really really sad
6/8/2018 c1 39Riene
So utterly sad and desperate. Poor Erik. He seems to be slipping into madness, his loneliness and need making it impossible to think straight. Grief will do that.

:( Probably not an inaccurate actual ending.
6/7/2018 c1 4friendorphantom
That was intense. Very powerful and well written.
6/5/2018 c1 C
Wow. I read the first Erik/Mannequin story you wrote and thought the story couldn’t get any sadder, and then you prove me wrong! Great writing and full of emotion.
6/5/2018 c1 Britt
So good but so sad!
6/5/2018 c1 Sue
Poor lonely Erik
6/4/2018 c1 grandma paula
wow oh wow...so well written...but so terribly sad and depressing it was hare to get through...I mean where do we go from here? absolutely the saddest moat awful story i ever read but so very well written. Im not sorry I read it but it will haunt me honestly...jusst so sad and depressing...I cant pictyre my Eric going that low...but you make it real for sure. paula
6/4/2018 c1 13sparklyscorpion
I LOVE THIS AND LOVE THAT YOU HAVE POSTED IT AGAIN! :D

This story is a perfect sequel to the first mannequin story. I love (and feel sorry for) Erik's descent into madness and how you can see his control slipping throughout the two stories until, at last, it breaks completely. Every time I read this fic it breaks my heart!

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