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1/6 c3 5Blitzstrahl
Well to be honest I thought this would be a rinse and repeat story of "Vampire Rei", "Werewolf Asuka", and
"Human Shinji". Where Shinji becomes the hapless "Lycapire" and brings peace to the two species by his ability to creampie Rei, and Asuka.

Instead this is just Underworlds plot scene for scene, with NGEs characters photoshopped in, and that's, given me a case of the "meh's".

But it's only 3 chapters so not enough time for anything unique.
1/6 c2 Blitzstrahl
Oh snap! Its Yui herself.
1/6 c1 Blitzstrahl
Rei is based off the Yui Ichijo prototype appearance?
12/25/2019 c3 229gunman
Hmm. A little bit more detail and description about who these people are, like Yuki and Kazama.
And while this was short, this did seem a fairly good read. Good pace and flow.
And still very much in line with the Underworld story.
Keep up the good work.
Write on.
12/25/2019 c2 gunman
Well, that was intense and very much following of the Underworld movie.
I wonder if you're setting this up to where Shinji is going to be a Lycan, or an experiment in which he is the Lycan/Vampire hybrid.
Still, seeing Yui as a warrior is a far cry from what her normal roll is.
Nice touch on that.
And who is this human who the Lycans were after?
Very nice.
Write on.
8/2/2018 c1 gunman
Nice prologue.
Need more details and probably more action scenes in order for this to be appropriately received.
And some introductions as to who this female Executioner is, would be awesome as well.
Aside from that this looks promising.
Write on.

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