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11/4/2018 c1 wotumba1
good :)
7/30/2018 c1 8orangetails
I like this story - Callen the 'protector', nice that it's not 'Nallen' (CRINGE) but just a friend/team leader looking out for someone he cares about - just the sort of person Callen is. And Sam knowing exactly where and what his partner is doing as always.
I absolutely love the thought of them both trying to keep a straight face..! Can totally imagine that lol!
7/6/2018 c1 79Bren Gail
I enjoyed the banter. The aftermath of the spider scene was great. I literally laughed out loud while reading the scene with Nell, G, and Sam.
6/11/2018 c1 Guest
Love it!
6/8/2018 c1 11countrygirluk56
Absolutely brilliant. We know how Eric feels about Nell but it's great to see Callen and Sam looking after her like a baby sister. Love the 'break the door down ask questions later' reaction from Callen.
Well done. :-)
6/8/2018 c1 27knirbenrots
This is what they do. So sweet to see how the two of them care for Nell...
Great one!
6/7/2018 c1 guest
awesome story you need to write more to it. great begining for how g and nell fall in love.
6/7/2018 c1 Guest
Very very good thank you
6/7/2018 c1 Vadercat
Like two big brothers watching over the little sister. I certainly chuckled at their protective antics. Just one spelling error you wrote door instead of do. But I really liked the story.

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