for The first kill is never easy7/30/2018 c1 
8orangetails
I like this story - Callen the 'protector', nice that it's not 'Nallen' (CRINGE) but just a friend/team leader looking out for someone he cares about - just the sort of person Callen is. And Sam knowing exactly where and what his partner is doing as always.
I absolutely love the thought of them both trying to keep a straight face..! Can totally imagine that lol!
8orangetailsI like this story - Callen the 'protector', nice that it's not 'Nallen' (CRINGE) but just a friend/team leader looking out for someone he cares about - just the sort of person Callen is. And Sam knowing exactly where and what his partner is doing as always.
I absolutely love the thought of them both trying to keep a straight face..! Can totally imagine that lol!
7/6/2018 c1 80Bren Gail
I enjoyed the banter. The aftermath of the spider scene was great. I literally laughed out loud while reading the scene with Nell, G, and Sam.
80Bren GailI enjoyed the banter. The aftermath of the spider scene was great. I literally laughed out loud while reading the scene with Nell, G, and Sam.
6/11/2018 c1 Guest
Love it!
Love it!
6/8/2018 c1 11countrygirluk56
Absolutely brilliant. We know how Eric feels about Nell but it's great to see Callen and Sam looking after her like a baby sister. Love the 'break the door down ask questions later' reaction from Callen.
Well done. :-)
11countrygirluk56Absolutely brilliant. We know how Eric feels about Nell but it's great to see Callen and Sam looking after her like a baby sister. Love the 'break the door down ask questions later' reaction from Callen.
Well done. :-)
6/8/2018 c1 28knirbenrots
This is what they do. So sweet to see how the two of them care for Nell...
Great one!
28knirbenrotsThis is what they do. So sweet to see how the two of them care for Nell...
Great one!
6/7/2018 c1 guest
awesome story you need to write more to it. great begining for how g and nell fall in love.
awesome story you need to write more to it. great begining for how g and nell fall in love.
6/7/2018 c1 Guest
Very very good thank you
Very very good thank you
6/7/2018 c1 Vadercat
Like two big brothers watching over the little sister. I certainly chuckled at their protective antics. Just one spelling error you wrote door instead of do. But I really liked the story.
Like two big brothers watching over the little sister. I certainly chuckled at their protective antics. Just one spelling error you wrote door instead of do. But I really liked the story.