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5/21 c17 Guest
I'm sorry, but a part of me is thinking that they are saying "seig heil" instead of just hail
3/29 c1 1TheCrackKing
Having large A/N's inflates the word count and actually stops people wanting to read your chapters. After you've posted a chapter and had the A/N read by people, I'd delete it. Also, probably a good idea to space out your paragraphs more.
3/28 c3 R
Ever hear of brigandine armor?

Shadiversity has a clip on youtube about it I strongly recommend. The rest of his content is damn good too.
3/25 c17 Svenion
good, but this is starting to be more omake than story. kind of hard to stay interested when it gets to that point
3/25 c14 Svenion
not a fan of the semblance, enjoying the story otherwise
3/24 c17 Knightshade94
Can't wait to read what happens next.
3/24 c17 2merendinoemiliano
Brief but nice chapter
3/23 c17 Wishfull-star
Lol that was awesome I loved the chapter and I can't wait for whatever happens next stay safe:)
3/23 c17 PrankK1ng
3/23 c17 bjenk4
The omake was awesome.
3/23 c17 4597boss
Nice Chapter.
3/23 c17 B Is Da Beast
thanks for the update, for some reason the story wasn't in my downloads anymore and when I saw the update are we found the story so I was able to download it again. Awesome chapter definitely enjoyed the O make LOLs
3/23 c17 1CeruleanJames
Dude. You’re story writing is 10/10. Keep up the great work, can’t wait to see where this story goes
2/23 c16 MrSunshine744
awesome chapter! that omake had me giggling like a madman haha
2/22 c16 Guest
I would love to read about the report for them since we got like 4 chapters talking about it.
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