
7/27/2024 c20 Guest
please please please update, I know it's been somewhere around four years, but I don't care because this is awesome and I need more!
please please please update, I know it's been somewhere around four years, but I don't care because this is awesome and I need more!
8/20/2019 c19
6Blufox03
Omg what a thrilling chapter. Besides a few points where sections were written twice, this was outstanding. I loved the character development and I can't wait to learn more about the 1994 incident from Davkd's point of view.
Hope Neil is okay Haha.
Also, hope you got good results! I just got mine and can understand the turmoil!

Omg what a thrilling chapter. Besides a few points where sections were written twice, this was outstanding. I loved the character development and I can't wait to learn more about the 1994 incident from Davkd's point of view.
Hope Neil is okay Haha.
Also, hope you got good results! I just got mine and can understand the turmoil!
6/25/2019 c18 Guest
Best chapter by far.
Best chapter by far.
6/26/2019 c18 Maywether
Oddly enough, this is enjoyable to read with the amount of effort put into it—I can’t wait for more
Oddly enough, this is enjoyable to read with the amount of effort put into it—I can’t wait for more
6/22/2019 c18
2ReadyWhenYouAre
i'm so glad to see you back here on the fanfiction page! (good luck with your exams btw) things went from 0 to 100 real quick and now i have One Fear...I mean, you can't just kill em all off like that right? nervous laughter for real, great chapter man! it's a miracle you find time to write amidst studying for exams

i'm so glad to see you back here on the fanfiction page! (good luck with your exams btw) things went from 0 to 100 real quick and now i have One Fear...I mean, you can't just kill em all off like that right? nervous laughter for real, great chapter man! it's a miracle you find time to write amidst studying for exams
2/17/2019 c17 Guest
My initial reaction after reading: What?! WHAT?!
My initial reaction after reading: What?! WHAT?!
2/17/2019 c17
2ReadyWhenYouAre
Ho-ly-CRAP am I glad I stuck it out for this story because that was an amazing reveal (and his state of deterioration makes more sense now too, genius!) sOrry for not reviewing in a long time, only got to catch up now but looking forward to future updates!

Ho-ly-CRAP am I glad I stuck it out for this story because that was an amazing reveal (and his state of deterioration makes more sense now too, genius!) sOrry for not reviewing in a long time, only got to catch up now but looking forward to future updates!
1/13/2019 c15 SomeRandomBloke
I love this so far! Are you ever going to explain why Max can see ghosts, though? I mean, Daniel and Jen seem like they might know why or at least want to know why and none of the campers seem to wonder. Also, why can't Max see Harrison or Preston? Aren't they ghosts now too?
I love this so far! Are you ever going to explain why Max can see ghosts, though? I mean, Daniel and Jen seem like they might know why or at least want to know why and none of the campers seem to wonder. Also, why can't Max see Harrison or Preston? Aren't they ghosts now too?
1/13/2019 c2 Guest
"Pills to stop the tears." is my new favorite quote.
"Pills to stop the tears." is my new favorite quote.
1/13/2019 c1 Guest
Waitwaitwaitwaitwait... I haven't read the whole chapter yet, but have you cut Nikki form the cast?! Why would you do that?! Other than that though pretty good.
Waitwaitwaitwaitwait... I haven't read the whole chapter yet, but have you cut Nikki form the cast?! Why would you do that?! Other than that though pretty good.
12/4/2018 c15 Guest
Jesus Christ jasper calm down. I really Hope next chapter gets really intense with max and jasper
Jesus Christ jasper calm down. I really Hope next chapter gets really intense with max and jasper