for That One Night3/2/2020 c1 
18Phrankster
This is my favorite of your one-shots so far. I love it because its so very Lola. You captured her so well in this, that Im almost jealous. I liked them a lot in the short time they almost were a couple and their storyline was a big part of why Lola became one of my favorite characters in all of Degrassi. So you describing her first time in such a sweet way speaks right to my Lola loving heart and makes me wish theyd kept them together a little longer. At least you gave her one good night with him to look back on. Your descriptions and attention to detail is something that again and again impresses me and this might be your best work (of what Ive read) so far in that department. You really captured the way Lola felt the excitement of it all as well. Great job :)
18PhranksterThis is my favorite of your one-shots so far. I love it because its so very Lola. You captured her so well in this, that Im almost jealous. I liked them a lot in the short time they almost were a couple and their storyline was a big part of why Lola became one of my favorite characters in all of Degrassi. So you describing her first time in such a sweet way speaks right to my Lola loving heart and makes me wish theyd kept them together a little longer. At least you gave her one good night with him to look back on. Your descriptions and attention to detail is something that again and again impresses me and this might be your best work (of what Ive read) so far in that department. You really captured the way Lola felt the excitement of it all as well. Great job :)
6/9/2019 c1 13degrassian98
I love this! I have such a soft spot for little one-shots or drabbles of missing pieces like this. I think it's a great way to fill in the gaps 3
13degrassian98I love this! I have such a soft spot for little one-shots or drabbles of missing pieces like this. I think it's a great way to fill in the gaps 3
6/21/2018 c1 Frankston
I liked this story so much! In fact, it made me like Mola more...I think what I enjoy about your stories most is how good you are at giving us a look into each characters' different thoughts and take on the narrative even as we see it play out in first person, and you can add Lola to your repertoire of characters you totally get XD. I wondered myself at first whether Lola had moved on from Tiny or forgiven Shay a bit too quickly, but reviewing that scene again: I think you were giving us a look into Lola's thoughts there, and she was trying to convince HERSELF she was happy for them, so for me it totally fit her thought process. Everything about the story just flowed perfectly for me!
At most in the way of criticism, I would have liked to see her take on the morning after with Shay and Frankie, especially having to look her bestie in the eye right after making out with her brother. I was a little disappointed to see it end sooner than I wanted, but that does leave room for a second story...I'd love to see another Lola, or Mola, story in the future! Wonderfully written, once again!
I liked this story so much! In fact, it made me like Mola more...I think what I enjoy about your stories most is how good you are at giving us a look into each characters' different thoughts and take on the narrative even as we see it play out in first person, and you can add Lola to your repertoire of characters you totally get XD. I wondered myself at first whether Lola had moved on from Tiny or forgiven Shay a bit too quickly, but reviewing that scene again: I think you were giving us a look into Lola's thoughts there, and she was trying to convince HERSELF she was happy for them, so for me it totally fit her thought process. Everything about the story just flowed perfectly for me!
At most in the way of criticism, I would have liked to see her take on the morning after with Shay and Frankie, especially having to look her bestie in the eye right after making out with her brother. I was a little disappointed to see it end sooner than I wanted, but that does leave room for a second story...I'd love to see another Lola, or Mola, story in the future! Wonderfully written, once again!
6/20/2018 c1 4OkuntinTenfeder
Hey, as promised, read and ready to comment: IMO you get Lola's voice really well. And I liked Mola - even think, that she might be better for Miles than Tristan, but with Miles, I think, he'd always look back to Tristan. Only thing that got me frowning, was Lola being happy for Shay and Tiny. Maybe it's me holding a grudge for Shay for being a jackass most of her time in NC, but I just can't imagine Lola being happy for them so soon after the first episodes of the season. Added up with her feeling replaced by Shay as much as by Tiny right in this evening. So, I see her more forgiving than happy for them.
-Okuntin
4OkuntinTenfederHey, as promised, read and ready to comment: IMO you get Lola's voice really well. And I liked Mola - even think, that she might be better for Miles than Tristan, but with Miles, I think, he'd always look back to Tristan. Only thing that got me frowning, was Lola being happy for Shay and Tiny. Maybe it's me holding a grudge for Shay for being a jackass most of her time in NC, but I just can't imagine Lola being happy for them so soon after the first episodes of the season. Added up with her feeling replaced by Shay as much as by Tiny right in this evening. So, I see her more forgiving than happy for them.
-Okuntin
6/16/2018 c1 Guest
You need to do more of this ship! Maybe an alternative scene of them doing it again? I dont know, but this was really good!
You need to do more of this ship! Maybe an alternative scene of them doing it again? I dont know, but this was really good!