for The Pain5/10/2019 c1 
23x Hemlock x
This is great! I don't think I've ever seen this pairing before, but with the way you wrote Pansy, I can definitely see Cedric going for her. You wrote the descriptions really well making it easy to picture the scene as it unfolded, and your grasp on Pansy's emotional state was very gripping! We don't get to see nearly enough of the pain that the entire student body goes through after losing Cedric, but this story fully makes up for it!
23x Hemlock xThis is great! I don't think I've ever seen this pairing before, but with the way you wrote Pansy, I can definitely see Cedric going for her. You wrote the descriptions really well making it easy to picture the scene as it unfolded, and your grasp on Pansy's emotional state was very gripping! We don't get to see nearly enough of the pain that the entire student body goes through after losing Cedric, but this story fully makes up for it!