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2/19 c4 God damn it
Good but please update my name represents what I said when I realized there wasn't a update
10/23/2020 c4 Joeyael0921
A good story can't wait for the next chapter
3/22/2020 c4 Yami-daseith
I think I read your first version of though I don’t remember it, I still like the idea but it seems very rushed especially this chapter I understand it’s the easiest way to Narrow and the others a power boost but they just started the academy and if Narutos skill is reflective of sasuke and satsukis I don’t see why it was needed unless they are going to skip the academy and graduate early even then they are still at least chunnin level I like an OP story I really do but this is to the point where it’s just broken and your the plot of your story doesn’t really make up for it, I am sorry if I am coming of as criticizing you story but you four chapters in and Naruto already has the rinnegan and can use it instinctively. And with how quick Naruto Hinata got together only for satsuki to join like 2 hours later it’s just all to fast. Again I am sorry if you take this review the wrong way but I just think you could have spent more time developing you characters which I do like by the way instead of just flying through it and giving new academy students abilities that are simply broken at their age. I know you aren’t going by cannon but sasuke didn’t even get his sharingan during the massacre and he was alone and under the itachis genjutsu. This just seems a little to unbelievable too me.
3/2/2020 c4 ps2boy.zachary
its great look forward to next chapter and a new chapter of your naruto\dragonball crossover
3/2/2020 c4 7HyperA2019
I am looking foward to Chapter 5 and I believe Naruto should be given Ryujin Jakka the sword of Yamamato.
3/1/2020 c4 1batmanuchiha
great chapter keep up the good work i hope to see more soon
3/1/2020 c4 SPark681
Hmm, seems Naruto has gained the rinnegan wonder what's next anyways keep up the great work!
3/1/2020 c4 1Bloody Rogue dragon deity king
Cool
11/15/2019 c3 7HyperA2019
I am looking foward to Naruto Konoha's Saiyan, Ch:11 and I think Naruto should train to challenge Beerus the destroyer.
10/3/2019 c3 Bjermen
If you really want to make Naruto op and unbeatable you could give him Za Warudo Over Heaven. If you don't know it has the power to overwrite reality and stop time for as long as the user wants to
6/16/2019 c3 ps2boy.zachary
nice work on this chapter if its better then the old one but keep both I like both of them.
3/10/2019 c3 god of all
Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon..
3/9/2019 c3 joecgarcia1991
Good story what are the pairings for the story will it be naruhina like your other stories or naruto/hinata/satsuki?
3/6/2019 c1 fluttershywinde
love this novel btw
2/25/2019 c3 Shifter
Interesting story continue soon as possible please
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