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10/9/2022 c1 Whooo-are-you
I do hope you’re still working on this story. It is absolutely one of my favorite fanfics I’ve ever come across! Thank you!
8/9/2022 c14 jessicalada123
I just want to say that I love your writing, I love your humor, and this story has healed my soul. That’s all.
8/22/2021 c4 6A-Song-of-Quill-and-Feather
Ahhhh. I love Fred and Maggie so much my heart is gonna burst. The dancing together? Amazing oh my god I love. And then the soft vulnerable moment at the end? I'm crying they're perfect. I love them. Amazing chapter.
8/22/2021 c11 17Maddie Rose
Yesss the wedding is finally here! I love Maggie's conversation with Angelina, I agree that she might have some insight on Fred because he is her brother-in-law. I've said it before, but I truly love how introspective Maggie is, how she considers all the factors before she makes choices. I love her, but I just wanna shake her and be like "FRED LIKES YOU".
8/22/2021 c10 Maddie Rose
Honestly, the way you portray Maggie's PTSD is so real and raw. Like the fact that the fireworks remind her of what happened to her brother and her experiences during the War. I feel so much for her, but I love that Fred is there to support her, even if I wish they'd held hands in that last moment.
8/21/2021 c9 Maddie Rose
"I slathered myself in SunShield like it might somehow also protect me from being an idiot." Fucking iconic line, and this is me except slathering myself in make-up.

I love how introspective Maggie is. She does a lot of thinking (I can hardcore relate to that), and it often gets to the stage of OVERthinking (again, we've all been there). I also love how she's less and less seeing Fred as unattainable. Yes, Maggie, he's what you deserve!

UGH Lee interrupting them how dare, they were having a moment! I'm glad that Alicia keeps interrogating Maggie about what's going on and if she's interested in Fred. It was such a tender and yet emotionally charged moment, and it's so wonderful that she has Maggie's best interests at heart.
8/20/2021 c8 Maddie Rose
I love that Alicia definitely suspects something is going on and that Maggie is completely bewildered as to why she would think that. There's always that sense of not seeing what's going on in a situation until you're looking at it from the outside, like Alicia is. Honestly, I love Alicia and Maggie's dynamic so much, Alicia is so supportive of her and genuinely wants the best for her, even if Maggie can't see much good in herself yet.
8/20/2021 c3 6A-Song-of-Quill-and-Feather
Amazing chapter, I was surrounded by sleeping toddlers with the biggest possible smile to my face from everything in this chapter.
I love Fred and Maggie. Like I knew I would but idk this chapter has cemented that I absolutely adore and cherish them and can't wait to see them grow into a couple. I loved the banter, and the game of chicken. All absolutely perfect.
8/20/2021 c2 A-Song-of-Quill-and-Feather
Okay I adore this chapter. I love the deeper insights we get into the after of the war, as well as some peeks into what affect the war had on Maggie and what happened for her in it. I can't wait to learn more as we go on.
I also still absolutely love the way you write dialogue. It's so well written and real and entertaining! The conversation with Fred and Maggie had me grinning so much through it all!
I love and adore Maggie so much. I relate so hard to her tendency to overthink, and just want to say I want only good things for her!
Amazing chapter!
8/20/2021 c14 6Mystic Scripture
okay I have waited to review until I finished/caught up, but this is brilliant! Your perspectives are flawless, the pining and awkward stumbling were realize and engaging, and you characterization was spot on! I love this and can't wait for more!
8/18/2021 c7 17Maddie Rose
I just love how, in Maggie's mind, she's got this perfect picture of how things are going to go with Fred and Yolanda. Like she definitely thinks she's got the whole thing figured out and then is genuinely confused when that's not how things pan out.

The trials are such an interesting thing really, and I can't imagine it would be easy for Maggie or Fred to see the people who caused them so much pain. It reminds me of the First Wizarding War except of course most trials were cut short and ended in a swift Azkaban sentence. Seems like things are a little different this time around.

Ooh, Alicia catching them out! I love Fred and Maggie's whole discussion, and that Maggie has someone to keep her company while she's going through a hard time.
8/18/2021 c6 Maddie Rose
Honestly Fred and Maggie opening up more to each other, especially on Maggie's part, is what I am here for. I love that she's convinced there is something going on with him and Yolanda, because I certainly know what it's like to overthink things.

As always, the banter is top-notch and the dialogue just flows perfectly. The characters might be a few years older, but they're still so in-character and I applaud that.
8/17/2021 c1 6A-Song-of-Quill-and-Feather
Ahh okay so I love this already. I haven't read any post war oc fics for hp, and I love it as a concept. Plus it being a FredxOC (and obviously a Fred lives au) has me so excited.
This was a wonderful first chapter that gave me a good sense of Maggie as a character and looking forward to learning more about her and her experiences in the war.
The dialogue and character interactions are so good and real I adore them.
I can't wait to read more and to see Maggie and Fred's relationship form from here. Amazing chapter!
8/17/2021 c5 17Maddie Rose
Ahh the morning after a night out (I say as I sit here sleep-deprived in my pyjamas during work hours). I'm glad that Maggie seems to be fitting in well with Alicia's friends. I also love that Oliver is completely undaunted by their nightclub escapades (there's always one person who is unbothered by lack of sleep and a hangover).

And UH OH I would feel very self-conscious too if someone I suspected had been flirting with my crush ended up being our tour guide.
8/15/2021 c4 Maddie Rose
Maggie and I share the exact same sentiments on nightclubs aka we are both not fans, so I wholeheartedly agree with her on this. Also ew at guys in nightclubs in general, I don't blame Maggie for being grossed out. I absolutely agree with wishing you could just say "no" without having to introduce another man to the equation.

There's something about the jealousy and the waving it away that's so real to me. I remember being single and having a crush on someone and then I'd be envious if I saw them flirting with anyone else, before reminding myself I was being absolutely ridiculous, so I definitely understand where Maggie is coming from, it's such a real and frustrating feeling.

Fred and Maggie just talking about their post-War trauma is just *chef's kiss* I mean I always love them but there's something so beautiful about the way they're opening up to each other. Also UGH the moment of sexual tension at the end where they absolutely could have kissed but then didn't, you're such a master at writing dynamics honestly.
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