
1/5/2019 c29
7Keytripper
Hey I really like this story. Don't get me wrong. I really look forward to reading this, especially since I have a disability myself. However, that being said, I have been bothered by several changes in the story. First of all, I originally liked how long and detailed things were in the beginning. And now I don't mind shorter chapters but they are now full of typos. And there was like hardly anything from the early teen and preteen years even though these years are very important. Like you put Astrid in and haven't mentioned her since they were little kids. Can you put in there what highschool is like for him or at least how things are between his friends at school?

Hey I really like this story. Don't get me wrong. I really look forward to reading this, especially since I have a disability myself. However, that being said, I have been bothered by several changes in the story. First of all, I originally liked how long and detailed things were in the beginning. And now I don't mind shorter chapters but they are now full of typos. And there was like hardly anything from the early teen and preteen years even though these years are very important. Like you put Astrid in and haven't mentioned her since they were little kids. Can you put in there what highschool is like for him or at least how things are between his friends at school?
12/30/2018 c28
1Massive HTTYD Fan
This is really more a review for Chapter 27, but here goes.
I loved how Toothless still has that incredible bond with Hiccup, that HE is the reason Hiccup can bring himself to start walking. They are so amazing together and they'll always have that bond, always. And they can do anything together... I really hope Hiccup gets a chance to work with Gobber! Gobber is almost like a second father and just... it's good.

This is really more a review for Chapter 27, but here goes.
I loved how Toothless still has that incredible bond with Hiccup, that HE is the reason Hiccup can bring himself to start walking. They are so amazing together and they'll always have that bond, always. And they can do anything together... I really hope Hiccup gets a chance to work with Gobber! Gobber is almost like a second father and just... it's good.
12/14/2018 c27 K. M
A wonderfully written story. I love the story and characters that go with it! Can't wait to read more!
A wonderfully written story. I love the story and characters that go with it! Can't wait to read more!
11/30/2018 c26 AnaWinchester-Universe67
Ooooooof great chapter! I can’t wait to read more after this point involving Hiccup’s recovery, etc.. Will good things come out of his amputation? Will he learn to move without the use of a wheelchair or crawling? I assume that a wheelchair will still be his primary use of mobility, but will he use a prosthetic as well?
Ooooooof great chapter! I can’t wait to read more after this point involving Hiccup’s recovery, etc.. Will good things come out of his amputation? Will he learn to move without the use of a wheelchair or crawling? I assume that a wheelchair will still be his primary use of mobility, but will he use a prosthetic as well?
11/30/2018 c26
23pandamaster97720
Wow you can really sense hiccup fears at the very last minute before his put under for his surgery to remove his leg and I am wondering why didn’t hiccup call for his father but he did call out for his mom and toothless before he blackout

Wow you can really sense hiccup fears at the very last minute before his put under for his surgery to remove his leg and I am wondering why didn’t hiccup call for his father but he did call out for his mom and toothless before he blackout
11/30/2018 c26
1Massive HTTYD Fan
...Amputation? I definitely did not expect that. Though, now I come to think of it, I really should have, shouldn’t I? I guess a Modern AU where Hiccup already has a bad leg can do that.
For some reason, it tore my heart that Hiccup called for Valka and Toothless but not Stoick. Painful. I just hope he comes out of it alright...

...Amputation? I definitely did not expect that. Though, now I come to think of it, I really should have, shouldn’t I? I guess a Modern AU where Hiccup already has a bad leg can do that.
For some reason, it tore my heart that Hiccup called for Valka and Toothless but not Stoick. Painful. I just hope he comes out of it alright...
11/26/2018 c25
23pandamaster97720
and amazing job as always and love how hiccup and fishlegs can understand one another with being "special needs kids" and that others do judge them except for a few who don't judge them or are afraid to be their friends

and amazing job as always and love how hiccup and fishlegs can understand one another with being "special needs kids" and that others do judge them except for a few who don't judge them or are afraid to be their friends
11/20/2018 c25 Griever321
got to love the brother bond keep up the great work... I was wondering if you were going to have Astrid stick up for hiccup if a kid bullys him
got to love the brother bond keep up the great work... I was wondering if you were going to have Astrid stick up for hiccup if a kid bullys him
11/20/2018 c25
26TheNaturalLlama3
I didn't think I'd like this as much do after reading the first few chapters. But I REALLY like this fanfic

I didn't think I'd like this as much do after reading the first few chapters. But I REALLY like this fanfic
11/20/2018 c24
23pandamaster97720
an amazing job as always love hiccup and fishlegs brotherly bond getting stronger

an amazing job as always love hiccup and fishlegs brotherly bond getting stronger
11/16/2018 c22
1Massive HTTYD Fan
Wow, that... Dragon is Hookfang? I did not see that coming. Will he be able to keep him? At least Spitelout will be happier about Hiccup now.

Wow, that... Dragon is Hookfang? I did not see that coming. Will he be able to keep him? At least Spitelout will be happier about Hiccup now.