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8/26/2020 c36 andrewpine
So that's it just going to let it hang and not finish it?
8/26/2020 c35 andrewpine
You'll be back.
I wonder when Ronald will try his luck again?
Seriously,you killed off Cissy.
8/26/2020 c27 andrewpine
Concentrate on the plan.
Take a leisurely stroll
Who is as sick as Ronald that they would help him cover up his. Crimes?
4/29/2020 c36 mlphill79
ok, I need to know... please finish this completely.
2/4/2020 c3 MadammeSnape
Albus dumbledore finally getting called out on his shit thank you!
1/28/2020 c3 andrewpine
think I'll pass. Severus
12/29/2018 c36 Anonymous
Hermione should be the pregnant by a guy and not a stupid fucking married old mother
12/29/2018 c30 anonymous
Amazing story. It would be more intriguing if Hermione was interested in Draco. No offfense but homosexuality is boring . I hate gays and lesbians
10/8/2018 c36 Trueloveneverdie
Oh my gosh freaking loved this I hope we get to read more stories about Cissy and Hermione!
9/19/2018 c36 Guest
I hope you write a sequel please such a good story
9/15/2018 c4 Guest
Damn, please work in your English! I cannot believe it: should of known? It is have or 've and Not of! That does not exist. You so realise that sentences need verbs not prepositions right?
So much Potential in this story but dir the live of me, I cannot read it like this...
9/12/2018 c36 2roon0
9/9/2018 c36 SereniteRose
another lovely chapter, thanks ever so much.
9/9/2018 c2 Guest
Please find a beta for this story. It sounds like it could be an interesting one? Can’t get past the errors because it distracts from the story.
9/8/2018 c35 MilandaAnza
Yes a cold ending but I feel like it’s unfinished, like Hermione is meant to call in a debt from Fate even if just to say goodbye. I’m guessing you just wrapped up the story? Or am I imagining the sudden stop?
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