for Twists and Time6/27/2018 c3 Jk
This looks like a good plot, really. But you need to be more specific with who is speaking what. If you don't, it all gets mucked up. Like, if one para is dedicated for Rose’s dialogues, don't add how doctors are reacting in it. Put it in next line or diffentiate it more like:
“..” she said to which Doctor grinned.
That's my piece of advice for ya. Great story. I'm definitely waiting for more! -
This looks like a good plot, really. But you need to be more specific with who is speaking what. If you don't, it all gets mucked up. Like, if one para is dedicated for Rose’s dialogues, don't add how doctors are reacting in it. Put it in next line or diffentiate it more like:
“..” she said to which Doctor grinned.
That's my piece of advice for ya. Great story. I'm definitely waiting for more! -
6/22/2018 c3 Dreamcatcher56
Yes, am feeling that there is more going on with Eleven than we know...I am not too happy with his attitude towards Rose...if he has changed his mind about wanting her along he should just tell her and save them both some pain...look forward to more.
Yes, am feeling that there is more going on with Eleven than we know...I am not too happy with his attitude towards Rose...if he has changed his mind about wanting her along he should just tell her and save them both some pain...look forward to more.
6/16/2018 c1 Guest
I hope they can find a way together, maybe both are unsecure and believe that the other one doesn't want the deeper relationship.
I hope they can find a way together, maybe both are unsecure and believe that the other one doesn't want the deeper relationship.
6/18/2018 c2 Dreamcatcher56
A bit unsure of this Nine...is he from Rose's past or is he possibly from an AU with his own Rose? Either way, you have drawn me in.
A bit unsure of this Nine...is he from Rose's past or is he possibly from an AU with his own Rose? Either way, you have drawn me in.
6/16/2018 c1 Dreamcatcher56
An interesting twist with a new Doctor and one so far removed from either Nine or Ten...appears that they are both unhappy with the current situation and wonder if this new adventure will provide clarity as to stay as is or depart to begin a new...a storyline you don't typically see, look forward to what comes next!
An interesting twist with a new Doctor and one so far removed from either Nine or Ten...appears that they are both unhappy with the current situation and wonder if this new adventure will provide clarity as to stay as is or depart to begin a new...a storyline you don't typically see, look forward to what comes next!