for A Legend is remade5/8/2022 c12 Guest
I liked reading it. Thanks.
I liked reading it. Thanks.
5/7/2022 c1 Guest
pretty good
pretty good
7/8/2021 c12 Lovnag
Well this is pretty good, though so far it all feels like just a beginning. Looks like Kiryu still hasn’t gotten his tattoo done.
Well this is pretty good, though so far it all feels like just a beginning. Looks like Kiryu still hasn’t gotten his tattoo done.
1/20/2019 c10 Ran
Please continue your warlords of remnant series
Please continue your warlords of remnant series
1/4/2019 c10 
20AlexArmin36
Take your time friend, art takes time but it last a lifetime. I enjoyed your work and I'll be watching you grow from where I'm standing.
I wished I had lots of free time like you have right now. life as a working man is rough for the weak-willed.
All and all, keep your pens steady and stocked. My last exam was stressful coz my primary pen ran out of ink while writing an essay.
May Majima's intellect help you friend.
Sincerely:
Alex Armin
Fellow writer and Friend
20AlexArmin36Take your time friend, art takes time but it last a lifetime. I enjoyed your work and I'll be watching you grow from where I'm standing.
I wished I had lots of free time like you have right now. life as a working man is rough for the weak-willed.
All and all, keep your pens steady and stocked. My last exam was stressful coz my primary pen ran out of ink while writing an essay.
May Majima's intellect help you friend.
Sincerely:
Alex Armin
Fellow writer and Friend
12/15/2018 c7 AlexArmin36
That ending.
THAT FUCKING ENDING.
Jesus, I almost split my side with laughter at this point.
Great, so Kiryu got a job with a ridiculously rich and perhaps insane kid with a fetish for money. Ain't gonna end well with anybody here.
I like it. With this production quality you're giving in, Im sure you gonna go far bro.
Sincerely:.
Alex Armin
Fellow writer
That ending.
THAT FUCKING ENDING.
Jesus, I almost split my side with laughter at this point.
Great, so Kiryu got a job with a ridiculously rich and perhaps insane kid with a fetish for money. Ain't gonna end well with anybody here.
I like it. With this production quality you're giving in, Im sure you gonna go far bro.
Sincerely:.
Alex Armin
Fellow writer
10/24/2018 c6 BoZ
I honestly was unsure how I would feel about this story when I saw the description. Kiryu in an Isekai story? Crazy. However, you handled yourself well although you run a strong chance of eating Kiryu as you develop him into this new world and body. There aren't many scenes that allow readers to understand what Kiryu is experiencing mentally with this shift in perspective. Regardless you are doing a pretty good job with this story and I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
I honestly was unsure how I would feel about this story when I saw the description. Kiryu in an Isekai story? Crazy. However, you handled yourself well although you run a strong chance of eating Kiryu as you develop him into this new world and body. There aren't many scenes that allow readers to understand what Kiryu is experiencing mentally with this shift in perspective. Regardless you are doing a pretty good job with this story and I look forward to seeing what you do with it.
10/11/2018 c6 TurboMonstaa
I’ll be honest, heading into this fanfiction, I wasn’t really expecting much from it other than your typical “genderbend” fanfic. Still, as a Yakuza fan, I decided to amuse myself by reading it. I can now say that after reading all 6 chapters (so far), I am pleasantly surprised. Impressed even. The story managed to characterise both Kiryu (With his stubbornness to bend his ideals) and the original characters really well in this story. They each felt like their own person (But Gabriel’s accent felt a bit overboard) and Kiryu did things that, well you’ll expect Kiryu would do. Hell, even the many references/throwbacks to the Yakuza series’ many iconic moments didn’t feel forced or peppered in. Instead it felt surprisingly natural and well integrated into the story. The only complaints I have so far with this story is that the pacing can feel a little strange at times. One scene would sometimes jump from one place to another a bit too much for my liking. I’m also a bit intrigued as to why Kiryu didn’t ponder too much about his current situation or past life in chapter 1. I understand he doesn’t want to complicate things too much but given how many times he has shown in the games that he’ll gladly put family ahead of him as his priorities, it felt like a missed opportunity. Having said that, I look forward to how the rest of the story unfolds. I’m stoked for the next few chapters even if you might not be updating the chapters as fast you would like. Cheers.
I’ll be honest, heading into this fanfiction, I wasn’t really expecting much from it other than your typical “genderbend” fanfic. Still, as a Yakuza fan, I decided to amuse myself by reading it. I can now say that after reading all 6 chapters (so far), I am pleasantly surprised. Impressed even. The story managed to characterise both Kiryu (With his stubbornness to bend his ideals) and the original characters really well in this story. They each felt like their own person (But Gabriel’s accent felt a bit overboard) and Kiryu did things that, well you’ll expect Kiryu would do. Hell, even the many references/throwbacks to the Yakuza series’ many iconic moments didn’t feel forced or peppered in. Instead it felt surprisingly natural and well integrated into the story. The only complaints I have so far with this story is that the pacing can feel a little strange at times. One scene would sometimes jump from one place to another a bit too much for my liking. I’m also a bit intrigued as to why Kiryu didn’t ponder too much about his current situation or past life in chapter 1. I understand he doesn’t want to complicate things too much but given how many times he has shown in the games that he’ll gladly put family ahead of him as his priorities, it felt like a missed opportunity. Having said that, I look forward to how the rest of the story unfolds. I’m stoked for the next few chapters even if you might not be updating the chapters as fast you would like. Cheers.
10/6/2018 c6 AlexArmin36
I like it. Keep going comrade.
Are you seriously gonna add a female medieval Majima here? Because Kiryu and the Yakuza game is not the same without Majima. If that's the case: HELL TO THE FUCKING YEAH!
And now Kiryu is a pretty girl, let's hope he didn't end up being surrounded by men wanting to flirt with him. It'll be a disaster for them.
All and all, keep it going ma dude!
Sincerely:
Alex Armin
Fellow writer
I like it. Keep going comrade.
Are you seriously gonna add a female medieval Majima here? Because Kiryu and the Yakuza game is not the same without Majima. If that's the case: HELL TO THE FUCKING YEAH!
And now Kiryu is a pretty girl, let's hope he didn't end up being surrounded by men wanting to flirt with him. It'll be a disaster for them.
All and all, keep it going ma dude!
Sincerely:
Alex Armin
Fellow writer
9/1/2018 c3 AlexArmin36
Wow.
It's beautiful.
Kiryu Kazuma was a legend, a Yakuza who doesn't fear blood and willing to shed his own. Unlike our generic MC whom was always a teenager and meek AF we have an aging Yakuza veteran in a body of a princess. You don't see that shit everywhere.
I think that Kiryu's magic would be heat moves considering how he always ends up in a fistfight. Having him fight a bear and won too is an exaggerated action for an Isekai character, but we're talking about a motherfucker who fucked up two tigers AT THE SAME TIME. Of course he can take on a bear!
I also likes how he arrived at the world. Instead of a pretty girl finding Kiryu, a Kratos-like guy found him instead and fostered him back to life. Also, it was a good touch for Kiryu's last word to be relief on a child who survived thanks to his action. He was a Yakuza with a heart of gold, it was totally in character of him
My only complain was that there were only three chapters on this work. I would love to see more from you friend.
May the god of hustle and libido smiles upon you!
Sincerely:
Alex Armin
Fellow author
Wow.
It's beautiful.
Kiryu Kazuma was a legend, a Yakuza who doesn't fear blood and willing to shed his own. Unlike our generic MC whom was always a teenager and meek AF we have an aging Yakuza veteran in a body of a princess. You don't see that shit everywhere.
I think that Kiryu's magic would be heat moves considering how he always ends up in a fistfight. Having him fight a bear and won too is an exaggerated action for an Isekai character, but we're talking about a motherfucker who fucked up two tigers AT THE SAME TIME. Of course he can take on a bear!
I also likes how he arrived at the world. Instead of a pretty girl finding Kiryu, a Kratos-like guy found him instead and fostered him back to life. Also, it was a good touch for Kiryu's last word to be relief on a child who survived thanks to his action. He was a Yakuza with a heart of gold, it was totally in character of him
My only complain was that there were only three chapters on this work. I would love to see more from you friend.
May the god of hustle and libido smiles upon you!
Sincerely:
Alex Armin
Fellow author