4/1/2019 c6 Guest
Please update
Please update
2/18/2019 c1 gotinceco
I've been wondering what happened in the war. Would be cool if explain in a later chapter.
I've been wondering what happened in the war. Would be cool if explain in a later chapter.
10/18/2018 c4 Tempest-Rage
hmm proto excalibur? Afterall, from what written there, It is male Arthur, not the female one
hmm proto excalibur? Afterall, from what written there, It is male Arthur, not the female one
10/3/2018 c6 Guest
update please its awesome
update please its awesome
9/28/2018 c6 Guest
Finish it finish it finish this story its finally gettin good
Finish it finish it finish this story its finally gettin good
9/25/2018 c6 robertpoker
can you update soon it was awesome
can you update soon it was awesome
7/10/2018 c6 DasChinButton
Well I look forward to seeing where this goes. I like the concept and hope to see a new chapter soon.
Well I look forward to seeing where this goes. I like the concept and hope to see a new chapter soon.
7/8/2018 c1 Marsuvees Black The Dark Lord
I'm sorry but you have to many grammar issues and sentence structure issues to ignore... besides that the flow of your sentences is really good... so please if you can either yourself or an beta reader... fix your G and SS issues...
I'm sorry but you have to many grammar issues and sentence structure issues to ignore... besides that the flow of your sentences is really good... so please if you can either yourself or an beta reader... fix your G and SS issues...
7/6/2018 c6 Guest
I'm confused, I thought that Sona and Rias (and their peerages) didn't know that Issei was a longinus wielder/ humanoid dragon (or that he was involved in the supernatural in general) that was protecting them.
Also when you said that he interacted with the student council, I thought he did it under a cover of the helpful student. Were you implying that he revealed his true nature to them?
I'm confused, I thought that Sona and Rias (and their peerages) didn't know that Issei was a longinus wielder/ humanoid dragon (or that he was involved in the supernatural in general) that was protecting them.
Also when you said that he interacted with the student council, I thought he did it under a cover of the helpful student. Were you implying that he revealed his true nature to them?
7/4/2018 c6 Guest
Update please, really good story by the way though, I hope you could also try to improve the way you write.
Update please, really good story by the way though, I hope you could also try to improve the way you write.