for The Red Dragon Emperor is a King!6/29/2018 c5 HolyKnight5
...These Fallen are DOOOMED. Seriously. Not only Issei its going to find them and BUTCHER them slowly and painfully.
Even if they survive, the simple fact its that Serafall its going to throw an ultimatum to Azazel with none of the usual personality, TWICE the malice and hatred, and Serafall deliberately ordering any Fallen to be killed-in-the-spot if found in Devil Territories everywhere without authorization, no further questions asked, as retaliation for daring to kidnap her surrogate Daughter.
Kokabiel will be stunned, forced to throw the group to the dogs, as even he didn't measure the out of proportion response of the usually "pathetic" Devils...Azazel would be for once angry, as Raynare's idiotic stunt may have almost ruined the secret peace Talks...and Azazel will take it in the renegades, only Kalawarner may be spared, but taken into a Devil peerage...
...These Fallen are DOOOMED. Seriously. Not only Issei its going to find them and BUTCHER them slowly and painfully.
Even if they survive, the simple fact its that Serafall its going to throw an ultimatum to Azazel with none of the usual personality, TWICE the malice and hatred, and Serafall deliberately ordering any Fallen to be killed-in-the-spot if found in Devil Territories everywhere without authorization, no further questions asked, as retaliation for daring to kidnap her surrogate Daughter.
Kokabiel will be stunned, forced to throw the group to the dogs, as even he didn't measure the out of proportion response of the usually "pathetic" Devils...Azazel would be for once angry, as Raynare's idiotic stunt may have almost ruined the secret peace Talks...and Azazel will take it in the renegades, only Kalawarner may be spared, but taken into a Devil peerage...
6/29/2018 c5 
14Yorae Rasante
I'll be honest, this story feels a bit rushed.
No, make it a LOT rushed.
But it has potential.
14Yorae RasanteI'll be honest, this story feels a bit rushed.
No, make it a LOT rushed.
But it has potential.
6/28/2018 c5 TheLaughingStalk
So he only participated in the grail war for 2 weeks? Isn't that too little time? At least 2 months, in my opinion... whatever.
I still enjoyed it I guess, despite a few holes this is still pretty nice.
So he only participated in the grail war for 2 weeks? Isn't that too little time? At least 2 months, in my opinion... whatever.
I still enjoyed it I guess, despite a few holes this is still pretty nice.
6/27/2018 c5 Leonardo Castro
You went with the Asia option, nice touch. A good chapter nightnightsky, and a nice setup for the next chapter. Although if you wanted to ratch up the tension, you could have left the ending without showing the mom being saved. Maybe a hint of a flash of light before losing consciousness. But still Sakura kidnapped, Issei to the rescue next chapter. I wonder if you will let Rias be the one that informs him? As she was about using her familiars to watch Sakura from a distance, it would be a good way for her to come into the story, and at least for Issei to owe her a favor. Or maybe Sona. Also I can't wait to see Sona reaction to Serafall x Issei pairing. Will you go for the overprotective little sister who doesn't approve of Issei and wants to break them apart, The Jealous Little Sister who wants her Big Sis attention now that it is focused on Sona, Sakura, and Issei, and not just Sona. Or will you take Tsundere Sister who like or love the pairing but doesn't want to show it because it too embarrassing, usual Sona. Or maybe tragic Little sister, with her crushing on Issei, but silently does nothing to reveal it, so that her Bis Sis and Issei to be happy. Which ever way you go, it'll be nice to see it unfold, as a Serafall x Issei pairing aren't done much, unless the author just lazily throws the whole female cast into Issei's Harem, nevermind plots holes they make with Sirzech is okay with his wife leaving him, or angels don't fall even after engaging orgies. As you can tell, I hate those kinda or storyline, cause they sound like SI, and they Grey Stu the whole thing with Si/Issei beating Big Red with a single punch cause he boosted a million time (which should had killed him).
I am very glad you are making this story. I can tell you are careful, trying to avoid plot holes and are actually think beyond just following the canon story with some minor changes. Thank you for your hard work. Good luck on future chapters, in this story and in your life.
You went with the Asia option, nice touch. A good chapter nightnightsky, and a nice setup for the next chapter. Although if you wanted to ratch up the tension, you could have left the ending without showing the mom being saved. Maybe a hint of a flash of light before losing consciousness. But still Sakura kidnapped, Issei to the rescue next chapter. I wonder if you will let Rias be the one that informs him? As she was about using her familiars to watch Sakura from a distance, it would be a good way for her to come into the story, and at least for Issei to owe her a favor. Or maybe Sona. Also I can't wait to see Sona reaction to Serafall x Issei pairing. Will you go for the overprotective little sister who doesn't approve of Issei and wants to break them apart, The Jealous Little Sister who wants her Big Sis attention now that it is focused on Sona, Sakura, and Issei, and not just Sona. Or will you take Tsundere Sister who like or love the pairing but doesn't want to show it because it too embarrassing, usual Sona. Or maybe tragic Little sister, with her crushing on Issei, but silently does nothing to reveal it, so that her Bis Sis and Issei to be happy. Which ever way you go, it'll be nice to see it unfold, as a Serafall x Issei pairing aren't done much, unless the author just lazily throws the whole female cast into Issei's Harem, nevermind plots holes they make with Sirzech is okay with his wife leaving him, or angels don't fall even after engaging orgies. As you can tell, I hate those kinda or storyline, cause they sound like SI, and they Grey Stu the whole thing with Si/Issei beating Big Red with a single punch cause he boosted a million time (which should had killed him).
I am very glad you are making this story. I can tell you are careful, trying to avoid plot holes and are actually think beyond just following the canon story with some minor changes. Thank you for your hard work. Good luck on future chapters, in this story and in your life.
6/27/2018 c5 1Thranduil Arryn
I really like the story idea, only the grammar could use a little more work but otherwise it's great.
1Thranduil ArrynI really like the story idea, only the grammar could use a little more work but otherwise it's great.
6/27/2018 c5 9jmspikey
oh yeah no their are gonna die so hard first off ya stole a dragon's kid that's already bad enough but a dragon who happens to also be fused with King Arthur they might as well kill themself now and safe themself the trouble
9jmspikeyoh yeah no their are gonna die so hard first off ya stole a dragon's kid that's already bad enough but a dragon who happens to also be fused with King Arthur they might as well kill themself now and safe themself the trouble
6/26/2018 c5 A Fan
This is actually pretty good. If the wring style was more professional and there was more character introspection and other things this would be fantastic. The concept is quite good it's just a pity that the writing isn't as good as the ideas. I look forward to more updates though. Please keep it up!
This is actually pretty good. If the wring style was more professional and there was more character introspection and other things this would be fantastic. The concept is quite good it's just a pity that the writing isn't as good as the ideas. I look forward to more updates though. Please keep it up!
6/26/2018 c5 5fangs of death
Fallen done goofed. Enraged Dragon father and Satan Mother pain beyond belief for Fallen Angles. Good story so far.
5fangs of deathFallen done goofed. Enraged Dragon father and Satan Mother pain beyond belief for Fallen Angles. Good story so far.
6/26/2018 c5 redclaw39
well dame going to need popcorn for the next chapter because the fallen done f***ed up real bad
well dame going to need popcorn for the next chapter because the fallen done f***ed up real bad
6/26/2018 c5 Guest
I'm thinking about making popcorn for the next chapter... It will be VERY interesting to see THAT clusterfuck.
I'm thinking about making popcorn for the next chapter... It will be VERY interesting to see THAT clusterfuck.
6/26/2018 c5 fafnir1404
The fallens are doomed and they won't even find a Sacred Gear. What will you make Sona's reaction be like when she finds out Issei and Serafall relationship?
The fallens are doomed and they won't even find a Sacred Gear. What will you make Sona's reaction be like when she finds out Issei and Serafall relationship?
6/26/2018 c5 Yoga pratama
Can you make Issei summon a servant like charlmange or other?
Also how dxd hero world are different than fate hero world?
How strong then?
Can you make Issei summon a servant like charlmange or other?
Also how dxd hero world are different than fate hero world?
How strong then?