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11/9 c5 12Dragonkyubii
I’m not one to be rude but, this fic needs to be redone, I can’t keep reading it. I tried I really did, but I’m the end I feel like you just rushed everything and didn’t put much thought into it. It has potential, but please have a beta read through it first. My fics aren’t that good either but please take time to revamp it if you ever update again. Im rooting for you and hope you can do Justice to this fic
9/22 c4 Elizabeth wincee
Who wrote this shit? Reading this make me wanna punch someone in the troat
7/30 c14 Guest
Both Yugito and Samui are older than Anko.
7/6 c20 1Yokoito Cheisa
Why in the description you wrote this fanfic as a NaruYugi. But in the chapters it's shows signs of harem.
6/22 c2 superbeyreviws
The concept of Kushina and Minato along with jiraiya and tsunade being neglectful is fucking bullshit idk why everyone thinks that shitting on narutos parents is good writing but its terribly OOC.
5/22 c20 10HyperA2019
I hope Naruto gains a Dojutsu.
5/15 c1 1monsterkillers124
you still haven't updated anything for awhile everything ok
4/19 c8 kriponi
wenn man am ende des kapitels einmal das fettgedruckte vergisst
3/26 c19 10HyperA2019
I am looking foward to Chapter 20.
3/4 c16 Guest
How does Itachi know Kamui?
3/4 c5 Guest
I've always hated the overused cliche of Naruto adopting a random OC little girl
2/17 c9 HyperA2019
I am looking foward to Chapter 20.
2/17 c1 HyperA2019
I am looking foward to Chapter 21 and Naruto should awaken the power of the Saiyan.
12/27/2020 c1 khositandan
poor
11/23/2020 c2 VuyolwethuNdlovu
So if Ay trained my boi then he should know lighting cloak and amor and why not give him the chakra chains and the minds eye of Kagura and does he have the nine tails or not
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