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7/2/2018 c1 Bloodmoon Hound
pretty good
7/1/2018 c5 anarion87
nice chapter
7/1/2018 c5 5Ryujomaru15
Pretty good chapter. Was hoping for a little side training and possibly better develop with Sayuri. But still pretty good to start out with.
7/1/2018 c5 Everstar17
Another good chapter! I’m really enjoying it keep it up!
7/1/2018 c5 jablanco
That was cool
6/29/2018 c4 lara5170
Shadow serpents? I'm surprised his family wasn't surprised to learn he was a seal master and jounin level? Does Kumo not advance strong ninja or are you keeping him genin for the genin exams?
6/25/2018 c4 Guest
A good update
6/26/2018 c1 1Datan-shi. okami
haven't started reading yet but keen to.. just gotta say cant that kami guy that keeps bitching shut the hell up.. if he doesn't like the fic then piss off..seriously jealousy is a nasty thing... anyway look forward to reading this
6/25/2018 c4 gruntsbreeder
Good chapter interesting story
6/25/2018 c4 Draco8762
The guy below me is extremely ass hurt and should literally stop reading this story if he doesn't like it. Cause if anyone should kill themselves it should be him.
6/25/2018 c4 KamiKageRyuuketsu
trash and your so fucking stupid really child really your fucking stupid as fuck and i hate retards like yourself. seriously you said naruto hated konoha and the people of that shitty village so fucking stick with him hating them or just go kill yourself you pathetic fucking retard
6/25/2018 c4 jablanco
That was cool
6/25/2018 c4 StrikerTheFallen
Not a bad chapter. Seemed a bit rushed towards the end but still good none the less
6/25/2018 c4 darth56
a very good chapter i did like the talk with his mom and sis now they should know he is not coming home i do love reading this story it is such a new view of naruto and it is a great story line thank you for writing this story and again thanks
6/25/2018 c4 5Ryujomaru15
Cool chapter can’t wait for the next one.

Those seem like good starting interactions between Naruto and Sayuri.

Keep up the good work.
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