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1/9/2019 c1 43tmtcltb
Lovely! I had never considered these two as a couple but I really enjoyed the way that you wrote this. The way that Harry soothed Tal. The atmosphere that you created was perfect.
11/18/2018 c1 133rebecca-in-blue
I'm mostly blind to this series of StarTrek, but I think anyone could appreciate the well-written hurt/comfort you craft in this scene. I especially love how Tal falls into step with Harry's swaying without even realizing it; that shows how in-tune they are to each other, even though they've apparently just come over a bumpy patch. It's pretty fluffy stuff, but I think its brevity and there references to their unhappy past ("everything that had happened," Tal's nightmares) keep it from getting too fluffy. I didn't spot any SPaG errors.

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