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5/31 c1 4SapphireBlue2007
Am I allowed to hate Claudio? And DON'T tell me I'm not because I would anyway!
6/21/2018 c1 7LettdViolet
This is amazing! :D the verbs at the beginning were a little clunky, but it started to smooth out to the middle. I suggest stating who the POV character is at each switch so readers aren’t too confused. And the ending didn’t really feel like an ending... maybe if you’d switched back to Beatrice for another confirmation that she’s bitter or something. But this is seriously really good.

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