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9/3/2022 c8 4Donnard
I kinda wanna let everyone know what all was planned to happen here... Eh I'll see if Blaise notices this review and comes to yell at me.
10/18/2020 c7 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter Is great and I wonder Is Mercury a male In this story?
10/18/2020 c6 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter Is great and things are starting to get more Interesting.
10/18/2020 c5 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter Is great and I like the battle that It showed the difference experience Team ARGN has with their Aura over those who have trained for many years.

Did Rost lose almost 70% of his Aura or was It 30%?
10/18/2020 c4 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter Is also great and I wonder how their Interaction will be with RWBY and JNPR.
10/18/2020 c3 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter great and I like the battle.
The plan that they came up with Is great.
10/18/2020 c2 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter Is great and I like that you focus on all the Huntsman and not only on Jaune.
10/18/2020 c1 HeartOfChaos13
I think that this chapter Is great and the story seems Interesting.
9/2/2020 c8 Thisisawesome89
Thxs for the update, love your work

P.D. leave it as Salem, its a unisex name after all.
9/1/2020 c8 Guest
Well noble we don't know if it will be Pyrrha/Joan. When Jaune "snitched" on Joan for looking at Pyrrha's ass, one of the 'what' was from Joan, so he could have just straight up lied.
8/31/2020 c8 4warrior of six blades
So the first ever team of males, Huntsmen, got into a fight because Carlishia had to act like a bitch to Rost and he threw the first punch into a fight. Before they all got interrupted by a Cyrano and was forced to fight for their lives against a really strong and intelligent Grimm.

I like how Rost put his bitter feelings toward Carlishia aside to save a fellow protector of humanity and how Shadow's usage of dust helped give them some edge to stall out the Grimm and blind it temporarily. Really shows despite how green they are, they do have potential and I think Salem might be weighing their worth in his eyes for now silently. Knowing they are green, but have some potential for his uses. Meanwhile, seems Amber has been attacked by Cinder. Freaking damn...
8/31/2020 c8 12Noble4259
I always ship arkos! But it's obvious your having his sister and Pyrrha get it on! But since Jaune isn't getting with Pyrrha I vote for femsun!
8/30/2020 c8 3odstrules21
Great chapter! Am I detecting a possible budding relationship with Rost and Carlisha?

Also, am I the only one that imagines Rost having a Russian accent?
8/30/2020 c8 Zombiedudecolletti
It is good to see a story that I have high interest in update. The Inquisitive I is upon you and it is intrigued . May the Man-Emperor's light shine down on you as well. P.S Don't Tell him we're here he might get angry.
2/20/2020 c4 12Noble4259
Can't believe I didn't leave a review for you bro. Hope to see it updated soon man.
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