for The Vanquisher of Grindelwald12/11/2022 c1 god eater
good start, could use a little polishing in choice of words and structure. using "got" should instead be "become or became" because it had different uses and rather breaking in the sentence
good start, could use a little polishing in choice of words and structure. using "got" should instead be "become or became" because it had different uses and rather breaking in the sentence
3/1/2021 c2 
9QueenErynn
ProclaimerofHeroes here from Reddit R&R, I read both the prologue and part one, and I'm glad I did before leaving a review. The prologue and beginning felt like just a wall of text that I had to get through. Don't get me wrong, I am glad I did read through and I very much enjoyed Tom and Dumbledore, but it was a bit much to get to. I wish I could give you a way to reconstruct it otherwise, but I can't think of any. Everything is needed and succinct and one you do get into it you want to read it, and I'm interested to see where this rabbit hole leads.
9QueenErynnProclaimerofHeroes here from Reddit R&R, I read both the prologue and part one, and I'm glad I did before leaving a review. The prologue and beginning felt like just a wall of text that I had to get through. Don't get me wrong, I am glad I did read through and I very much enjoyed Tom and Dumbledore, but it was a bit much to get to. I wish I could give you a way to reconstruct it otherwise, but I can't think of any. Everything is needed and succinct and one you do get into it you want to read it, and I'm interested to see where this rabbit hole leads.
1/19/2020 c14 Ridergal
Finished reading all 14 chapters, it was a very engaging read. Like how you craft this alternate Riddle's world. Will be looking forward to how the story progresses.
Finished reading all 14 chapters, it was a very engaging read. Like how you craft this alternate Riddle's world. Will be looking forward to how the story progresses.
11/2/2019 c13 Mamy 83
Wouah ! Mais comment j'ai fait pour ne pas tomber sur cette histoire avant. Elle est tout simplement originale, fantastique et passionnante. En plus, c'est mis à jour régulièrement, j'ai vraiment hâte de lire la suite
Wouah ! Mais comment j'ai fait pour ne pas tomber sur cette histoire avant. Elle est tout simplement originale, fantastique et passionnante. En plus, c'est mis à jour régulièrement, j'ai vraiment hâte de lire la suite
4/21/2019 c13 Gurgaraneth
Love it
Poor tom dont worrk harry will still love u tom
Home will gets his wand snaped nd azcaban
Love it
Poor tom dont worrk harry will still love u tom
Home will gets his wand snaped nd azcaban