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8/5 c59 FriendlyFire59
This has been an interesting story the way you are intertwining the timelines, I do hope to see more chapters.

My one nit pik is the two Deus ex Machina's in the story line.
7/31 c59 Erielaw
Very unusual and welcome story. I hope the author will post more chapters, but either way, the ride’s been fun. Thanks for sharing.
7/22 c57 Lilly1127
I just re-read this - it's such a great story. I hope you pick it up sometime!
7/8 c1 the-unimaginative-idiot
So many good nah great stories abandoned…. Due to real life challanges… makes my heart break
6/12 c59 5Bitten and Hisses
Thanks very much for writing this. I've enjoyed where it has gone as I've read it over the last few days.

I've passed over the story numerous times in the past as I was put off by the summary, though I'm not exactly sure why, now.

What you've done here has been complex and intertwining five separate HP fanfiction storylines all in one fic feels like it should have been a daunting task, but you've pulled it off really well. As well as some novel and refreshing takes on the plotline, I think the quality of your writing has developed well over the course of the three years and more you've put into this. Where some authors would have taken this down the crack/humour route and cut it down to a few chapters, you've done in-depth characterisation that drives the story and clearly differentiates each of the five 'Harrys' as separate characters with their own unique responses to the situations that arise.

I do hope that you return to this project to finish it. I'll be keeping you on my favourite stories list, just in case.
4/22 c59 CheekyMonkee2020
*ahem*
*checks calendar*
*quirks brow*
3/14 c59 Abi
I loved reading this fic and have found it fascinating. I really hope that you continue it. It has been well over a year since your last chapter and I hope you are well. Refund you say? Anyway, this is such a unique idea and I look forward to an update, but if not, then it's been fun.
3/2 c1 wearedeadpool
pretty good start so far.
11/30/2023 c59 46Ashera fanfics
Probably the best HP fanfic I've read. I hope one day you get the time and will to finish it, but it was a great ride anyway. The last chapter leaves it open ended so we can imagine the rest of the story.
10/24/2023 c1 Guest
Wow what a terrible chapter 1. No chance am I reading this story
10/8/2023 c57 dianaanne
I really hope you finish this story; it’s unique and well-written.
10/1/2023 c58 14Freddie Rindklip
This fic has not been updated in a while. I hope life and your muse let you get back to it. If not, I did get reading enjoyment from what is posted.
9/30/2023 c45 Freddie Rindklip
I read this fic some time back. It seems Lord Hillyer is a parslemouth. It is a worthwhile fic to re-read.
9/30/2023 c9 12LWJ2
I've been enjoying this story very much; you're to be congratulated, it has more plots-within-plots and plot turns than the television show ALIAS did. Thanks for sharing this with us.

Cheers from the First Colony.

LWJ2
9/30/2023 c35 Goldrune09
Poor Astoria
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