for Redemption4/14/2020 c13 James Birdsong
Nice update
Nice update
4/5/2020 c13 ceesestar
Woohoo! Absolutely loved it! The fluff just warms my heart and puts a smile on my face! Little Yuui is so sweet and I so love this story! I’m really excited to see what happens next and can’t wait for more chapters, but take your time and work on whatever makes YOU happy! As you said, this needs to be fun for you so don’t worry if you can’t regularly update! I really love this story and this chapter, and I’m sure everyone else does too! So just know that you always have supporters here :) no need to feel insecure about it in the least! It’s much better than anything I could ever write hahaha!
Woohoo! Absolutely loved it! The fluff just warms my heart and puts a smile on my face! Little Yuui is so sweet and I so love this story! I’m really excited to see what happens next and can’t wait for more chapters, but take your time and work on whatever makes YOU happy! As you said, this needs to be fun for you so don’t worry if you can’t regularly update! I really love this story and this chapter, and I’m sure everyone else does too! So just know that you always have supporters here :) no need to feel insecure about it in the least! It’s much better than anything I could ever write hahaha!
9/6/2019 c12 James Birdsong
Good chapter of course
Good chapter of course
5/4/2019 c11 James Birdsong
Nice ten chapters
Nice ten chapters
3/10/2019 c7 
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Hi! My computer broke, and it was such a joy to find this and the last chapter waiting for me when it got fixed! I love seeing Yuui get better with magic, and this is my favorite ongoing fic! If you still need a beta reader, let me know, I'd love to help you out!
5IputBellainthewitchelmHi! My computer broke, and it was such a joy to find this and the last chapter waiting for me when it got fixed! I love seeing Yuui get better with magic, and this is my favorite ongoing fic! If you still need a beta reader, let me know, I'd love to help you out!
1/13/2019 c5 IputBellainthewitchelm
Poor Yuui! He's such a cute kid and I just love him. So much happens in each chapter, this was such a joy to wake up to on Sunday morning!
Poor Yuui! He's such a cute kid and I just love him. So much happens in each chapter, this was such a joy to wake up to on Sunday morning!
1/9/2019 c4 IputBellainthewitchelm
HHHHHHHHH! I loved it so much! I loved the bit where they had a "marital" dispute while Fai was STUCK TO AN ENTIRE DRAGON! And I was so happy the dragon didn't die :) And the bit at the end with Yuui was ENTIRELY TOO SAD IN JUST THE RIGHT WAY! The fight scene was REALLY well-written, I like how you blended short and long sentences, it really flowed!
Sorry if this is too much!
HHHHHHHHH! I loved it so much! I loved the bit where they had a "marital" dispute while Fai was STUCK TO AN ENTIRE DRAGON! And I was so happy the dragon didn't die :) And the bit at the end with Yuui was ENTIRELY TOO SAD IN JUST THE RIGHT WAY! The fight scene was REALLY well-written, I like how you blended short and long sentences, it really flowed!
Sorry if this is too much!
1/2/2019 c3 IputBellainthewitchelm
Oh my gosh! I just read through all of this and absolutely love it! Your characterization is amazing, I love how they react to each other. I would love to see them leave for magic training, but it's up to you!
Oh my gosh! I just read through all of this and absolutely love it! Your characterization is amazing, I love how they react to each other. I would love to see them leave for magic training, but it's up to you!
12/18/2018 c3 3Taqasim
Hello !
Still a pleasure reading you, they're all so cute ! Kuro seems to become a very protective dad x)
And Yuui is blowing things... I hope he will progress quickly, poor roses... Will his magic be particularly strong for one type of action ? (healing, fighting, protecting, etc.)
I think it's more in-character if Fye tries his best to offer the better training possible to his twin, but then there's the problem of the barriers he maintains to protect Suwa... And Kuro still has to protect his country, so he can't go with them... Hm...
I'm impatient to see what is your idea, until now I liked them pretty well x')
Good luck for the next chapter :)
3TaqasimHello !
Still a pleasure reading you, they're all so cute ! Kuro seems to become a very protective dad x)
And Yuui is blowing things... I hope he will progress quickly, poor roses... Will his magic be particularly strong for one type of action ? (healing, fighting, protecting, etc.)
I think it's more in-character if Fye tries his best to offer the better training possible to his twin, but then there's the problem of the barriers he maintains to protect Suwa... And Kuro still has to protect his country, so he can't go with them... Hm...
I'm impatient to see what is your idea, until now I liked them pretty well x')
Good luck for the next chapter :)
11/28/2018 c2 Taqasim
Hi !
I stumbled upon your fic searching for some KuroFai, and I really liked those two chapters !
Little Yuui is very cute, I hope he'll feel better around others soon (especially Kurogane) :)
I don't know if someone already told you that, but I think there's a little mistake in the second paragraph of the second chapter : "now lived with the man with the red eyed man who had made him food", maybe you forgot a comma ? Sorry if I'm being intrusive "
So, I just wanted to tell you I really appreciated reading your story, I hope I'll see another chapter in not too long :)
Hi !
I stumbled upon your fic searching for some KuroFai, and I really liked those two chapters !
Little Yuui is very cute, I hope he'll feel better around others soon (especially Kurogane) :)
I don't know if someone already told you that, but I think there's a little mistake in the second paragraph of the second chapter : "now lived with the man with the red eyed man who had made him food", maybe you forgot a comma ? Sorry if I'm being intrusive "
So, I just wanted to tell you I really appreciated reading your story, I hope I'll see another chapter in not too long :)
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7/5/2018 c1 James Birdsong
Good fanfic of course
Good fanfic of course